Dream Game: a Random New Bloodline Every Day

I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters. It felt a bit confusing and confusing, and the plot span was too big. It was fantasy at one moment, then it turned into martial arts, and then it turned into a palace fight. To be honest, I don't have the patience to read on.

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The creativity is good, but the writing style is not very good. Reading long paragraphs is a bit tiring. When I reached the fourth chapter, the dialogue between the characters still needed to be refined. It was too stiff. There could be more descriptions of the environment and character profiles, instead of just dialogue.

The protagonist can use the ability to randomly transform every day to accumulate some resources for free. For example, transform into a dragon, spit some saliva, draw some blood, cut some flesh, poop, and create some dependent creatures as materials.

Martin's morning🤔

You know what I'm going to post . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Martin, Martin, every morning you wake up~ Martin, Martin, there is a character waiting~

The theme is Infinite, which I like, but each copy is too fast and ends before it starts. I recommend checking out the old Infinite series, such as The Evil Within and Death List, which I like.

I would like to make a suggestion, it is best to add Martin in the introduction so that it can be found when searching.

Emmm, it's very strange to see it. I feel that the dialogue between the characters is too emotionless, and it feels too boring. It's not attractive. Everything else is fine.

The ideas are attractive, but the details are too rough. For example, the author of the end of Kyushu wrote that the next copy will be updated, rather than updating after a certain point in time or a certain condition is met. How is the end of the next copy defined? If a person has not finished the game, can he always stay in a certain version? If it is a server-wide update, whose copy ends will prevail. There is also an auction. The author writes that it can only be opened after the team copy is completed. The author also wrote that the protagonist wanted to make friends and saw that the friends were still in the dungeon, indicating that the end time of the dungeon was inconsistent.

I'm going so familiar with the description, it's Infinite Horror FX, Tears

The creativity is good, but the writing is deducted! A little tired from watching

The creativity and subject matter are quite good, but the writing style is a bit streamlined and lacks a sense of ups and downs. There is no fluctuation in my heart when I read it.

? Why does a song appear in my head out of nowhere? Blanch! Dead memories are attacking me!

I feel like the smell of running accounts is a bit too strong.

Such a good book, why is it so eunuch?

Brainstorm ideas. No format required. If you have the source, can you tell me Thank you.

Quite deserted