I Have the Immortal Peach Tree

When I read Chapter 8, I felt that it was boring. I was talking to myself. I really want to write it down and be more serious. Look at what other people write. The setting of "All Laws and Deceptions, I Am the Spirit Master" is very cliché. The previous book was unfinished, so just look at the beginning and make a judgment. There is also "Wulongshan Cultivation Notes". The style of this book is somewhat similar to yours. It is a daily narration method, and the characters and plots are completely unreliable. I also heard that "Then let them show their loyalty!" "The author's previous book was given to the editor to take a look at, and the beginning was changed seven or eight times. In summary, it's not that no one reads it, it's just that it's not interesting and interesting. If you still insist on writing, then don't be embarrassed and learn more from it. Scholars know everything, so learn from it!

Even if the protagonist of the novel is slow in cultivation, why are the cultivation of those people so slow? Later, after the protagonist takes control of the sect, each hall leader actually only has the cultivation level of the Qi refining stage? Is the foundation building period so lacking? And there have been 100 years of childbirth and rest? At the same time, there are pills that the protagonist has never taken? Hasn't anyone else eaten it?