It's Just Ability Extraction

The writing is okay, and the character plot can be said to be quite satisfactory The main body should be more light-hearted and silly The writing style can be said to be average There is no big problem in logic, but it is a bit confusing to read The heroine also feels very strange and conflicts with the setting. The setting is said to be a big sister, but when getting along with the protagonist, she seems... Uh, strange? You can change it In short, you can see it.

It's quite exciting, and the story always develops in directions I didn't expect.

Hurry up, author, I want to read the rest!

The summary in the previous article was not detailed enough. As for the heroine, she is a senior official more powerful than the police chief. She has taken care of him for 6 years without asking for anything in return, and is even willing to buy him a high-end prosthesis. As for the protagonist, he doesn't study or train, so he just keeps submitting resumes in vain. After working for 6 years, he still refuses prosthetics. He even ignores the heroine's reputation as a high-ranking official and lives with the heroine when he applies for a duck (see the second brother's application condition is a duck). After failing to apply for a duck, he did not stick to his "persistence" in the past 6 years and accepted a prosthetic. Then Goldfinger came, it gained strength, and began to admire the breasts, legs, waist, and clothes of the heroine who had taken care of him for 6 years without asking for anything in return. The heroine was injured and her body was miserable, and she lost one of her eyes. She was not sad or worried (the words were amazing: for her, she could recover), but she was just afraid. I didn't say what she was afraid of, but from my point of view from the beginning to the end, she was afraid that her backer would fall.

Originally, I came in for the setting point between the male and female protagonists, but after following it, I found that the worst part was the female protagonist, and I was attracted by other plots. My impression of the heroine is almost like - Oh, it matters, um, that's it. Oh, she has strength, um, that's it. Oh, she's charming, um, that's it. Hauni is more like the heroine, or there is no heroine, and there is no need for a heroine. Chu Huan is like a character who provides the protagonist with start-up capital and a part-time backer.

What would the protagonist be without Goldfinger? This is a fw who has not been able to recognize the reality for 6 years, just for the sake of not knowing what is called persistence, and has not improved himself in these 6 years, and has not made much apology for dragging others down, and even after this, he has not persisted.

Just because~

For example, dried bamboo shoots or dried shiitake mushrooms may be good ingredients, but they need to be soaked in water before they can be made into dishes. The plot connection in the book is too "dry" and stiff. The perspectives of authors and readers are completely different. If you don't write a lot of content in the book, it didn't happen. A large amount of daily and excessive plots need to be added to guide the development of the main line. The pace is too fast, there are too many characters, and the system, introduction, performance and use of skills are too little.

What a mess! Who is the protagonist?

It's pretty good to watch, but I feel like there's a problem. The characters in it can kill people casually without worrying about any consequences. For example, a woman opened fire in a supermarket, and the first one killed the instructor. If the background of the era is like this, then it's completely apolitical. The protagonist obviously belongs to the ZF camp, but he can't feel the existence of ZF at all.

This is the first book I've read on Qidian. It's a good read. Great support for the author!

Even if the current computer is disconnected from the Internet, it will only make you fail! It won't be so outrageous that the data will be wrong!

Chu Huan

The previous title didn't seem to attract readers, so I changed it. I hope all readers will forgive me! !

It's nice to read. I haven't seen such a lighthearted article in a long time. It's just that the author is too slow to update 🔨🔨

Only then did I realize that I had raised myself to death...