Shenhao: It Started When the Family Business Was About to Go Bankrupt!

Later, I write about going to the mother-in-law's shop to cook and eat with my mother-in-law. This very daily thing keeps recurring, which really makes me feel watery and disgusting. It appears too many times. It would be better to describe it simply, such as walking to find your mother for dinner, and then you can skip it. There are too many daily tasks. Can you speed up the process and mention the proportion of describing the company? The daily routine is just to make the character more three-dimensional, but once this side is described, it can be described less. I think we have written enough about the heroine and her mother. Can we not write a chapter about them which requires 7.8%? Otherwise, why not read those that write about daily life? People can still make jokes when writing this kind of thing. What you write about daily life, the author, is tasteless and it is a pity to discard it. The most important thing is that there is some key information about the company interspersed in it. It is easy to miss it if you skip reading. Is this business writing or daily writing? The author should think about it. Don't describe it in such detail every day. There are some things that can be skipped, and there are also times that can be skipped and stretched.

The name of this medicine is water. The dogs shook their heads when they saw it. It looks so ugly after taking it.

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A few days ago, I was browsing next door to see if you had any new books. I didn't expect you to come here quietly.

I discovered it today and read it in one sitting. It is considered top-notch among many great writers. I even think it is no worse than Bread. Some points are better. Each has its own advantages.

Author, are you writing a novel or popularizing science knowledge? Each chapter has a large explanation of popular science. No one reads novels for this reason. And every time the salary structure has to be drawn out and explained, it is completely unnecessary. There are so many chapters. You can only show the salary structure in a few chapters. When the salary appears later, you can give a brief explanation of the salary (the salary structure is in Chapter xx). Isn't that great? It has become more and more boring recently. I understand if the author doesn't expect to earn royalties from writing novels, but if you continue to rely on this, it will be difficult for you to achieve better results. There are no great novels that have a lot of explanations in each chapter. We are here to read the novel to make it more enjoyable, not to listen to your popular science about why the protagonist does what he does and what the meaning of it is. What's the use of telling us these things? It's just a novel for fun, but we don't really expect to learn anything from it and implement it.

Author, the frequency of erotic scenes is too high. From today onwards, I will report you if you do any pornographic drama.

Anliang? This book is one of the rare things I can subscribe to there. I remember I left a message there before. Someone copied your book here, so I changed the name of the person. I set 500 speaking points, but the report didn't work. It's so fucked up 😠😠

Time passes so slowly. Writing more than 200 chapters in one summer vacation is not over yet. It seemed like everything was done in a short time. Whether it's gold e-waste, hyping up ginseng, or engaging in scientific research. It feels like many times I can do a month's work in one week, and a week's work in one day. Feeling a bit rushed.

The front is okay, as long as it can stand up to the plot of Xia XX at the beginning (I haven't remembered the name for hundreds of chapters), but it may be that the daily description is too watery (Brother Wu Hao and Zhen 😰 😰 always appear to find a sense of presence). There is basically no profile description of the characters. Thousands of people have the same template. In addition, the dialogue between the characters is very long-winded, and it is easy to get bored. I can't stand it anymore In addition, the protagonist and Xia xx's so-called love feeling is also baffling 😅😅 The description of the relationship between the protagonist and Xia xx does not feel sweet, but it is very boring, either doing it or doing it Xia xx's concept of money changes very quickly (from her description, I don't see any difference from the so-called female anchor) Finally: I personally think the author writes very well about business development If you can learn from the side descriptions of characters and objects in other works, I believe...👍👍

All new!

The author's first novel: Shenhao: From Zero to the Top of the World

This author writes very well, and many things are very detailed. He can also fill in the gaps for you in advance if the readers think of something that does not fit the bill. However, because it is too detailed, it seems very cumbersome and a bit tiring. Personally, I feel that the score has dropped from 10 to 7 or 8. Son, and then the starting point of this book is too high. I am a conscientious entrepreneur and the third generation of the rich, so it is difficult to fit in. After all, I am just a tragic little guy who reads novels to kill time. It is difficult to fit into the identity of someone who is born rich. Overall, I highly recommend it. After all, the writing is really good.

Because the group manager's cat is a commercial spy, he secretly played with his mobile phone and made a mistake. Book friends who were kicked out by mistake are asked to rejoin the group.

Lao Bai, after reading this book, I feel dizzy after reading all kinds of drug information. I feel that it is not as good as Brother Liang's. Brother Liang's business is in chips and high technology, so it goes without saying that An Xin Investment is worth mentioning. In addition, the heroine is not as good as that book. In comparison, Wu Hao's book seems to be thinner. It's just pure emotion🤤🤤

As a Shenhao novel, it's pretty good. As an urban novel, it is just average and not particularly outstanding. I couldn't stand watching it until the end. The protagonist's super power has too many loopholes. In reality, he is just meat on the chopping board in the eyes of others.

The writing is good, but his father is too annoying. I really don't know how his company does it. Pure waste. I don't know how Xiao An would have died if it weren't for him. Not as good as Anliang's father.

The plot I'm writing now makes me feel like everyone is playing a real-time interactive game, and everything they say is thought up by the same mind. The plot is also driven by system rewards, but does not reflect the setting of serving the protagonist, because several times the protagonist does not want to do something, the system pops up a reward and the protagonist does it. It seems quite awkward. Although the system rewards are profitable and everyone will choose them, I am not happy that the system you provide should be worth a lot of money. Normal system events should only appear when you are entangled, not when you are describing the protagonist after making a choice. I feel like I have no ideas of my own and am kidnapped by system rewards. The good thing is that the two large surprise scenes you did for the heroine do look very romantic and enviable. These are all written in a way that makes me feel that this is what the protagonist wants to do for his girlfriend. The live broadcast is also quite interesting The various events are also reasonable. After all, the novel must be logical, and reality does not need to 🤭 Another suggestion is to pull data in the dialogue. Combined with the character design, everyone should not speak like "Baidu Encyclopedia". It can be more colloquial. Isn't it the same with data support and narration? But it is improved compared to the previous Anliang book, at least I can still read it Anyway, the main plot I am currently reading is that the protagonist discovers that he is a premature infant with the help of the system and has health risks. Then he improves his body through the drugs discovered through the rewards provided by the system, and at the same time sells/shares the benefits attached to the drugs, making money while improving his own class. Finally, can you update White Magic Star more? Daily updates are totally not enough. It's hard to follow! ! !

After all, everything is about love and romance, and you are still alone. You are not a top-notch rich second generation, but you are definitely a capable person. You go to help a woman's family every day. This is okay, but it is not okay for you to account for too much of the novel.

Mr. An's new skin

It's a very good book. Why was it written as a harem novel?

It's a pity, it's not as good as the previous one

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Good guy, Brother Liang has over 5,000 chapters and is still updating. Lao Mo has something.

I just went to see Brother Liang, but when I came back, it suddenly ended 😓

When will the next one 😰😰😰

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I'm really afraid of being fed to death. I've watched it from scratch several times 😅