Danzo-Sama Taught Me What to Do.

So far, it's good and interesting. Just don't drag it out later.

I feel like the impression of Naruto being a worker is too deep. It's hard to hang out with the pot shadow. Let's write about being a fun person. In a chaotic world like Naruto, it's quite fun to be a fun person.

I have read the previous book, and I have also read this one. I have some ideas. The ideas in the previous book are actually quite interesting, but it is a pity that the results are not good. When you become more powerful in writing in the future, you can turn around and write again, avoiding all the pitfalls you made before. At the same time, you also hope that this book will produce good results.

I can't complain, so I'll just say two things. First, I'm too self-satisfied. Second, I need to break it down into segments. It's really tiring to watch.

Not a bad idea. But the setting of the protagonist ruined the idea. The Six Paths Sasuke Jinchūriki. To put it bluntly, in this plot, except for facing Otsutsuki, no matter what you do, it will look stupid, superfluous and unnecessary. This kind of plot with a character who possesses the pinnacle of combat power, if the effect is good, often directly weakens the existence of the protagonist, and even turns into a group drama. For example, a certain bald head and a certain supporting actor. Just two saints who had almost no "material desires" came directly. But even so, they are only very powerful, but they are not the so-called omniscient and omnipotent As for Six Paths Sasuke, I think there is no need to report the Otsutsuki family's skill list. The feeling of refreshment comes from the mental stimulation brought by twists and turns. It's not about the benefits the protagonist has received or how much power he has. On the contrary, the benefits of paper data in running accounts. It can easily become a blocking point, because you obviously have the ability to bulldoze everything, but you are nodding and bowing to this adult and that adult all day long. This will become a poisonous point. Of course, poison points can also become part of the performance effect to a certain extent. The next step is to bring out the most terrible consequence of this type, which is boredom.

After reading more than twenty chapters, Danzo was only a few pages out when he somehow got the Mangekyō Sharingan and was tortured. Me directly? . The plot was written very concisely, and problems were solved inexplicably.

It feels like the system is like the Sage of Six Paths, he only appeared to make up for Sasuke 😭

Why are you obsessed with Danzo? The same routine can be good if written by another person. For example, you can write about the first generation and the second generation, or, in reverse thinking, it was all the fourth generation who instigated it even though the others are gone. Hokage has a lot of substitution routines For example, the one who sealed a second generation in his body, and then there was the one who sealed Uchiha Madara, and others.

Well written imaginative writing style

This introduction, Naruto is a worker?

Is this a bad book or a particularly bad book?

If I could store my brain for a while, it would still be fun to watch.

OS before writing: The results are very poor, the writing is terrible, and the readers have negative comments. After writing os: Happy, such a photo is fun.

As the title states, after reading four chapters, I started to read like a crazy guy

It's very well written, please update more.