Leisurely Life on the Peninsula

The character of the protagonist is disgusting, he is both upright and indecisive.

The last few pictures are weird, they don't have the same natural and comfortable feeling as before

I have some questions after reading the first chapter. I don't think a female star would just rent a house like this. Let's not talk about it. When we met for the first time, we agreed to have dinner together. She must understand the etiquette and would not agree so quickly. For a stranger, as an artist, she would not agree so easily, and her manager would not leave with peace of mind just by saying this. Of course, if there is foreshadowing later, there will be no problem.

Why do I feel that the direction of the plot is a bit strange? I haven't taken the cabbage here yet and I'm having an affair with Jisoo. Don't write it off.

1. Can Shirley rearrange the ending? You can save each other with the protagonist and become good friends who talk about everything. This can actually become a catalyst for the relationship between the protagonist and Sister Pei later. The sense of fate in the previous version was a bit strong. There is no need to be too cruel. Isn't the existence of the novel just to make up for some of the regrets in our hearts? 2. Fishing is not the problem. The problem is that there are too many aspects about fishing, and you are still slow to update. Either you update twice a day, or write less about fishing. No one can stand fishing for two or three days at a time. You can't just write for fishing guys. 3. There is no need for Zhang Yuanying to write it, or replace her with someone else. There are so many Five Generations groups, why hang them on this crooked-necked tree? That's it, come on, using fishing as an entry point is still very novel, and I look forward to the follow-up development.

Actually, it's a bit buggy. HiBi is rich because of the popularity of Bangtan. If you, EXO, dominate other boy groups, then SM should be HiBi. Otherwise, where would Bang Si Hyuk have the money to buy other small companies?

Overall it's good, but the confession is a bit abrupt and a bit too early. I don't know if I want to bury the knife or just settle it. It would be better to delay it a little later and add some more emotional scenes. Overall, it's good. Don't be pigeonholed.

If you write about fishing, just fishing. Why should you write about Pei Datou?

Single heroine? Or multiple heroines

Iron juice guys, can we eat fish from the Han River? Isn't that something super serious?