
Ming Dynasty: the Poison Prince, Started by Robbing Xu Miaoyun to Marry Him
大明:毒士皇子,开局抢婚徐妙云
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- Completed
- Length
- 960k Words
- Genre
- Historical
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Song-Yuan-Ming Dynasties
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I like Xu Miaoyun very much. Please give the author a boost in writing. Come on, come on.
The plot design and character creation are very poor. The protagonist, a character with little aggression and low purpose, has no charm. The most important characteristics of Zhu Di and Xu Miaoyun have been changed in a mess. A plot of fifty or so nonsense about an engagement misses the point. You seem to have forgotten what kind of audience the title of your novel attracts. Women like the protagonist say they are not afraid to fall in love with her even if they have a crush on her, and her character is worthless if she gives up even if there is a chance. Time travel allows you to take control of the situation, not to serve as a dog to Zhu Di.
Can you write well? Typos and incorrect sentences. If you are not good at writing, practice more
Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.