Douluo: Modify the Dialogue, Everyone Goes Crazy

Everyone, come and listen to me. I'll just say this: Chapter 20 is on the shelves.

This is already the number of times Douluo's narration has been modified.

It's okay. Although the plot is childish and not worthy of scrutiny, and the characters are not in line with the original work, it is really funny. Also, I think Dugu Bo and Dugu Yan didn't handle it well. It would be better to leave a fairy grass for Dugu Yan, and then give Dugu the method of forcing poison into the soul bone. Bo, after all the fairy grass has been cut, I gave a solution that treats the symptoms rather than the root cause. It feels very unauthentic. In the end, it is a bit short, but there is nothing I can do about it. This kind of plug-in is not easy to control the rhythm. It is commonly said that the plug-in is too big. And the author does not seem to be good at writing daily life, so it is very short.

I hope the author can stick to it and finish it. I think Dou Er's use of this system is also good.

This book is very well written, but there is another book that I can still read - Douluo Peerless: Life Simulator

It's funny, it's quite funny, and it would be nice to write it down later.

Recommend a new book - Peerless Tang Sect: I Simulate the Legend of the Dragon King

Douluo Continent👍👍👍

The system gives the time traveler a chance to travel through Sword Douluo, and gives him a month or three months to prepare. When the time is up, he will be transported there. There is no need to give a gold finger, so that there is some challenge. Otherwise, if you are ready, and you still have to give a gold finger, it is equivalent to living a perfect life on vacation. Unless you are going to Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, Mortal Cultivation of Immortality without a gold finger, it is really difficult.

Anchor, I have an idea for you to make your next Douluo work, that is, the system gives the time traveler a chance to travel to Douluo Continent, and after making some preparations for him, he used to search for how to achieve the divine status, how to match, how to use people's hearts, the personalities of various supporting characters, etc. When traveling to the past, there is no need to give the time traveler a golden finger character. Choose a good character. For example, in addition to the Elephant Armor among the lower four, don't be in the middle.

The author's writing style is not suitable for Starting Point, but suitable for Tomato

The plot is very confusing and the writing is very clear. The author should be a junior high school or high school student, and there is a small chance that he is just a freshman. But you can still dance and watch when you flip it up. This book is more suitable for publication in a certain magazine.

I think Blue Silver Pig and Haotian Donkey are better 😏

Recommend a novel - Peerless Tang Sect: My Simulation of the Dragon King (formerly known as Peerless Tang Sect: My Simulation of the Dragon King Legend)

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

Will Bibi Dong and Liu Erlong accept it?

Can you answer whether the updated novel has multiple female protagonists?