Rebirth in 1993, My Father Is an Educated Youth Who Returned to the City

The beautiful Xishuangbanna cannot keep my father. Shanghai is so big. Is there a home for me? My father has a home and my mother has a home. I am left alone. It seems redundant.

It's a mess with no main plot, it's about a father-daughter meeting, the prelude is good for more than ten chapters, and there are a lot of nymphomaniac-like women. It's really crazy that this kind of book can get good grades. The prices and wages are outrageous. A high school teacher who graduated from college in 1993 earns a salary of 128 yuan. Plus various subsidies, the salary is less than 200 yuan. This is the real world. In your book, there are all kinds of nonsense. A box of fast food on the train dares to be listed as 10 yuan. As for instant noodles, I'm sorry, there was no such thing on the train in 1993. 1,100 Yuan to buy a suit for an unrelated kid? All I can say is that you, the author, are so obscene that you are invincible in the universe! The hourly salary of a translator in 1993 was 2,000 yuan? Author, are you sure it's not Zimbabwean currency? There are also red envelopes of 200 yuan given to unrelated children. The above is total, not to mention Shanghainese who watched it in 1993, even Shanghai in 2023 is impossible! The transformation of the bald Guo Yixin was too sudden. I wrote that he stole a dozen kilograms of copper from telephone wires and sold it for a few hundred yuan. I don't know what to say. Most of the telephone wires at that time were aluminum cores, not to mention that the telephone lines in old alleys were produced in the 1980s or even the 1960s and 1970s. In addition to stripping more than ten kilograms of copper, Guo Yixin couldn't get enough even by cutting all the telephone wires in the alley. Copper prices peaked in 1993/94. The price of brass was about more than 20,000 yuan per ton. The purchase price of brass at scrap stations was 8-10 yuan per catty, and the price of red copper was 13-15 yuan per catty. Don't question it, I've done this job before! Oh, there is also a newcomer who writes a manuscript of 300 words per 1,000 words. Why not just 300 words per 1,000 words? In this way, the protagonist will become a tycoon with one book and achieve financial freedom! All in all, this book has too many outrageous plots, which can be called poison!

One chapter has 8 pages and about 180 words per page, which is just over 1,400 words per chapter. Then starting from Chapter 15, it was just water and grinding. Explaining the relationship between the characters requires you to write things in such detail. The parents of the supporting children have to write a chapter like this, and the pen and ink take up so much weight. Chapters 15 to 49, a total of 35 chapters, you haven't finished yet. You have been working hard here because we readers can't see what you are doing. Either you start over and rewrite it, or you just close it now.

At the beginning you wrote about a bunch of pitiful people, which attracted a group of people with rich, kind and compassionate hearts. Then you open a harem and fall in love with each other. Do you think the labels of age, daily life, finding relatives, scars, and harem are appropriate?

With such a good subject matter, there is not as much water for you as the ocean. Who cares about so many NPCs? Is it okay to focus on a few key points and leave the others alone? I haven't seen the main plot for half a year.

The title of the book is quite attractive, but the trivial details in the content are also quite annoying. There is not much useful information, and it is even deliberately omitted. It is like a blurry one-stroke pass. It has the most useless conversations, as if it is not willing to write, but it is like talking to oneself. It is even like AI, a robot template for emotional expression. It is rich on the surface but inflexible.

I read less than 160 chapters and abandoned the book. The female protagonist is not likable and the male protagonist is just like his father.

I don't think it's that bad. The drag is really dragging, and it's a bit bloody. But the subject matter is really good, and the writing is not pure white text. Personally, the writing style is acceptable. I think it is like this. The core is recognizing relatives, but it does not necessarily revolve around recognizing relatives. There are too many supporting roles, which are a bit out of the main line. The character of Meixia is well written and has its own thing. At least this character is created independently by you. There is no Too much of a shadow of other works. The other two female protagonists still don't have outstanding personalities and are more realistic. There is no feeling that everyone else except the male protagonist is a scumbag. It just feels like meeting the male protagonist at the best time. I haven't met a particularly suitable one before. From the perspective of a refreshing novel, Meixia is too far ahead of them. From the perspective of a realistic novel, they are also indispensable. I hope there will be new female protagonists in the future, who can at least compete with Meixia.

I feel like I'm just eating crappy money. It doesn't matter if I don't have the quantity, but I don't have the quality either (><)

It's almost 200 chapters and you haven't recognized your dad yet. You are too arrogant.

Too watery. I wasted 7.8 Yuan, bah, dog plague

Fun, I really enjoyed watching it. I'll keep the subscription coins for you to burn.

I don't know much about the prices in Shanghai at that time, but they shouldn't be so ridiculously high. It feels like I just wrote it casually and just opened my mouth.

When I worked in Jiangsu in 2008, my monthly salary of 1,500 was pretty good. I am curious whether the salary of 3,000 set by the author in Shanghai in 1999 was really that high? ? ?

Relying on the defense, I am really convinced. I procrastinate and write messily. The main line is hesitant and hard water. It is useless.

The author is a screenwriter, I guess. I haven't read more than a hundred chapters yet, but I'm convinced. It's on par with those bloody TV dramas.

It is best to write out the content in the introduction before charging, otherwise it will be just superficial and deliberately delayed in order to collect money, which will give a very bad impression.

I really can't stand this kind of procrastination about whether to recognize my father or not, and whether to divorce or not! I can only say that it's well written, but I'll save it until I've rounded up the topic first, and then I'll read it.

The subject matter is very fresh and the writing is good, but the plot is really dragging. Each plot takes 3 or 4 chapters, especially when picking up girls. After reading it patiently, I couldn't stop thinking about the plot and just stayed put. What about the outline? Write wherever you want, running diary

The protagonist is so scumbag, he is no longer sentimental, but overly sentimental, and I can't stand it anymore. This kind of biased novel can have more female protagonists, but the protagonist cannot actively be a scumbag.

People in the book review section say that the main plot is too slow, and I agree. The supporting characters were written a bit too much, and many readers were lost. Will adjust slowly. Some readers' comments are quite pertinent, and Hemp Oil will listen to them. It hasn't been long since Sesame Oil wrote a book, and there happened to be no good books, so I tried to write. Please be more tolerant and tolerant. It will be improved later to give the sesame oil some time to grow. Readers, please give me your support

The plot has twists and turns. It can go too far, and your patience will be exhausted. Will you be suppressed later before you admit your relationship?

You are dragging your feet, your subscription money will be burned. You are really dragging your feet.

67W words, I didn't recognize my biological father, he ran away 886

The subject matter is really good, it has the flavor of "The Debt", but the plot is really slow and the main line is vague. The conflict between the protagonist and his father is little by little and the author is slowly grinding it out. It's all fast food literature. Who has the patience and your ink?

The writing is getting worse and worse... Withdrawn

Have you acknowledged your relationship? No need for me to keep raising you