Dark Journey to the West: Me, the Buddha Without Heaven?

It's so watery that it can't be any more watery, it's too watery. Secondly, the character of the protagonist who is so ambitious makes people feel speechless and cheating. Of course, ten birds in the forest are not as good as one in hand. No matter what the opportunity is, you should give priority to improving yourself. At least in the mid-term, the leveling is better. And the most important thing is that this reason for leaving the opportunity is very lame. Don't mention it again and again, okay? The writing style is old-fashioned. The nature of the article is not based on the logic of the story. It is based on emotional contradictions and expressing feelings (if you don't understand, refer to Qiong Yao drama) (Author, you are not in an urban area. It is based on emotion and should explore the good and evil of human nature. Yesterday, I talked about the love story between men and women) Summary : The logic of the story is very weak, and the emotional conflict is basically based on jokes, which is not interesting. The author is more suitable for unlimited flow (or fan fiction), not for cool writing (he is not suitable for making up his own stories), the golden finger is purely numerical, and is standard for cool writing or epileptic writing (the author himself is more suitable for pure mechanism or mixed stories) ), the result is that the article he wrote looks like hydrology no matter how you look at it, no, it is not like it, in fact it is hydrology It is recommended to watch it when you are short of books. Although "A Batch of Water" has no excessive advantages, it also has no fatal shortcomings. It is just suitable for passing the time p s: If this thing doesn't adopt the world view of other works, or mix several world views into it, it will definitely become a eunuch. The author is not suitable for an original world view (you can try semi-original, semi-original is to change the world view of others into your own). If you want to make money, it is recommended to play Infinite Streaming. If it's for love, then pretend I didn't say it

😰No, the author is also called Cao Xu? Labor and management are also called Cao Xu! 🙄I feel weird reading it

The author probably wants to make fun of Black Myth Wukong, but most people who read the novel don't play that game. Most readers will think that the plot of Black Myth Wukong is a piece of cake.

The introduction to the work is too strong, leaving people with no desire to open it.

What rubbish name was changed? Delete it.

I just feel that whatever the protagonist lacks, he gives it to him. This is a smelly, old-fashioned way.

Say a few words. Now I have caught up with the latest chapter, and what gives me the most intuitive feeling is the protagonist's wit, which is often revealed inadvertently. He Wu Neng's discussion was the first time that he increased the stakes with tact, and then responded to the accusations of other monks tactfully. (I see that the author has modified it. It is no longer a direct bet, but a method of discussion and competition that is closer to the monk.) Once again, the idiot came to Fahai Zen Temple, and the protagonist helped him, which was also very witty. Also, when fighting against the black shadow in the True Dragon Chess world, he also acted very naturally. Some people said that the subsequent martial arts test was very bad, but I felt that it better reflected the character of the protagonist. He could see the current situation clearly and deal with the elders of the outer sect who were oppressing him reasonably, instead of acting recklessly. (The author also gave a reversal here, which feels a little childish, but there is actually a hidden reason behind it, which suddenly makes the previous childishness more reasonable. I won't spoil it here.) Later, the protagonist uses Wu Neng to help promote Huangquan Jiaonu, which is also a kind of wit. Taking it all together, the character of this protagonist is pretty solid. Uh-huh, uh-huh, I saw someone in the comment section said that the protagonist is a monk, but they didn't write about the indifference that a monk should have. The author wrote it very clearly. This is a layman who chose to join Fahai Zen Temple for the sake of superior martial arts. He also wants to return to laymanship in the future. He can pretend to be a Taoist monk from time to time, which feels very consistent with the character. If you ask him to remain calm throughout the whole process, his character will collapse. In addition, in addition to the protagonist, several supporting characters also have their own characteristics. Qijie, the monk who was the first to show his wit in responding to the enemy. Wuneng, a flexible fat man, has a filial piety towards his master. Mingchen, a handsome monk who is willing to give up everything for revenge, and his infatuated girlfriend are also very unique. Mingkong, the protagonist's errand boy, is a person who knows how to advance and retreat. If it can be written well, I feel it can have the potential of a group portrait. After talking about the advantages, let's talk about the disadvantages. The writing technique is somewhat ancient, a fantasy novel with a monk skin. It's not the kind of writing that catches people's attention at first glance. In addition, there are so many monks in Fahai Chanyuan, but there is no strong sense of being a monk. Taking it all together, it is a novel with some story to pass the time.

If you change me into a little monk, the taste will be on point. You must stand on a high moral ground when speaking, and be honest and sincere, only then can you be a monk. Don't you think it's strange that the old monk calls other monks "Little Master"? You can call me nephew first

Will practicing the forbidden technique that reduces longevity become one that increases longevity?

Since he is a genius and the problem of Qi has been solved, the status of this Buddhist disciple cannot be given up, otherwise it will be too frustrating.