Way to Victory

The details of the game are too poor and there is no sense of involvement. Reading is like reading a running account. You can learn from other basketball articles. Isn't writing just about you copying me and me copying you? A sense of involvement is very important. A sense of involvement is very important. A sense of involvement is very important. Say important things three times.

Completely write a novel of more than 1 million words. This feels good, come on

The other one can be slowed down, and this one should be carefully polished. The ideas are quite clear. The game scenes can actually be more detailed according to the situation. The content of domestic competitions is fine now, such as more important games, such as the Asian Games, or will you go to the NCAA in the future? American training camp? One suggestion is that you can run separately from Yao Ming, or ask your dad to buy some shares. The Warriors are good, and then you can add some jokes and the like. The pace can be a little faster in the front, and you can slowly refine it after arriving in the United States. It feels pretty good, and I may become a well-known online author of basketball novels in the future!

The update is too slow... One update every day

This is a novel for fans, but it's pretty good. It just depends on how it goes from here.

I suggest the author read some English books and listen to English reviews. There is room for improvement in the author's English-Chinese vocabulary, and the swear words also lack some soul.

The creative idea at the beginning was quite good, with a bit of a nostalgic and realistic feel, but then it turned out to be a mindless and fun story.

Writing two books at the same time? Come on⛽!

I would like to give a suggestion to the author, you can write more details of the game, such as windmill dunks, pull-up layups, passing details, fadeaway shots, so that there is a sense of involvement. The details will not be copied from other basketball articles. The sense of involvement is very important for readers to feel comfortable reading.

Is the protagonist's template Lao Zhan?

That's nonsense, Yao Ming's family still doesn't have enough to eat? You're just kidding me, then I'm born after 1995 and it will be worse than him. I didn't even know what milk was before I went to elementary school.

I have a question, why are most basketball novels written in a time period ten or twenty years ago? Why are there no basketball novels that have led Chinese basketball out of decline in the past few years or in recent years?