Writer: Starting from the Twin Childhood Memories

It's not very good. One is that you started writing novels in kindergarten and it was too outrageous. Then the writing style was very strange and difficult to describe. It had a feeling of immature literary youth, which was bland, boring and awkward. There are so many messy descriptions that it gives me a headache. When you write a novel, it doesn't mean that if you don't know what to write and pile up a bunch of sentences that look interesting, you will be given points.

Everyone, I'm sorry. I've been a little bit hurt recently due to the influence of the many talented Internet writers who write and copy public articles. I only have a 2,000-word serial for two days in a row. I deeply regret, starting from tomorrow, I will return to 4,000 words. And next, I will think about the plot carefully. I am only 18 years old this year and a 9-year-old reader, but I am also a new online author less than a month old. It is normal for me to be criticized for the mistakes I have made, but there are indeed some that cannot be corrected. However, I will never shirk the ones that can be corrected.

Okay, okay, okay

There is no sense of immersion in the parallel world at all, because if you take works from decades ago, there will be a great sense of fragmentation. Calabash Baby was first released in 2000, and Rainbow Cat and Blue Rabbit was first released in 2024. Can you bring this kind of thing into it?

I revised it again and deleted some embarrassing jokes Lu A fried beans, Lu B stewed beans, Lu C cold beans, Lu D steamed, braised beans is Lu E, stir-fried is Lu F, dry pot is Lu G, and soup is Lu The Lu H, the oily Lu J is eaten, the braised noodles are Lu K, the steamed Lu L, the fried M, the Lu dry stir-fried N, the sesame sauce beans are Lu P, the Lu Q is put in eggs, the Lu R is put in minced garlic, even if it is delicious, it is just a bean stick. (Damn, handwriting is so tiring) I'm sorry, in order to sign a 6,000-word contract, I added some things that I didn't even like in the first few chapters. I will refine them I hope the supervisor ฅ(⌯͒• ɪ •⌯͒)ฅ

I have revised the previous chapters again. Thank you for the readers' feedback.

After finishing the book, see what your shortcomings are, and then treat it as practice

If you can't take photos like this, who can see them even if they're free and put them on the shelves?

I don't know what to post, so I'll just post an emoji firstヾ(๑╹ヮ╹๑)ﾉ"

The first shot was hesitant and then robbed. One of the eternal pains of investing

There are so few words. I read two and wanted to pick them up.

The story is poor, it's like reading a narration. Changing the sentence description is similar to the published youth literature books, which is not in line with the starting point of novel reading.

There is almost no plot, just various narrations