Red Mansion: Picked up a Lin Daiyu

I particularly like the perspective. If you are confused about the original work, don't read it. It is a sweet story about dog food in the Red Mansion. It is not abusive, and good girls basically have qcqs. There is no 🐢male complex at all. It jumped out of the framework of Jia's family and cut off Baoyu's path from the root. There was no Bisha Cabinet and Lixiang Garden, no Tianxiang Tower, no Longcui Temple. . All are neat and good girls. .

But the content is not boring, and the details are a little lacking. 16 Chapters of monthly pass + full subscription support. Can be seen. Forage. Never stop updating

A few days ago I read a book about a branch of the Jia family inheriting the Ningguo Mansion. As a result, he released everyone as soon as he left, leaving only a dozen people around to help him. It is understandable that the servants of Ningguo Mansion were not one of his own. But Ningguo Mansion covers an area of ​​dozens of acres and you only keep a dozen people. After a month, except for the place where you live, the rest of the place has turned into a "haunted house". Can you believe it?

The word count is the same, and so is Sister Lin. . . In addition, this book will not be a serious pure love. As long as it is a red house and has a single female protagonist, well, the audience will not be large.

Are you busy enough with so many women? I don't care if the protagonist's waist is good or not. All I know is that once there are too many women, you, the author, will be very tired and your writing will be very difficult. Can you manage so many girls with different personalities?

The first four chapters are really well written, with the delicate and sensitive Miss Lin + the nervous maid, and the timid "stubble" who can even feed a tortoise to death. An interesting and vivid novel, I will definitely follow it.

There are daily routines, powerful strategies, wars, espionage and wits, technological improvements, tactical innovations, the relationship between kings and ministers, a savior riding alone, who can turn the tide, the cultivation of childhood sweethearts, the master's maid, the erotic love, the slut succubus... The above contents are all reflected in the currently updated chapters. If you are interested, you can read in depth. The protagonist is young but has outstanding abilities, both civil and military. He is entrusted with important tasks by the lord and is able to turn the tide. So far, he has been loyal and lived up to his trust. I will use images like Lu Xun and Jiang Wei to portray him, which gives him a strong sense of déjà vu. The role of the Lord (King of Qin) is based on Li Er's description. There is nothing to say, so don't write it down casually. Lin Ruhai passed away without making a direct appearance this time, but so far he has been living in the correspondence between sister Lin and has not returned from the business trip. Even because sister Lin was obsessed with men (?), He did not remember to write letters to his biological father during the Mid-Autumn Festival, which is quite miserable for a man. The most interesting thing about the daily part is probably the interaction with the girls. Watching Sister Lin's story line will give you the feeling of developing a good Loli wife. The war part should have been carefully designed. Improved tactics and espionage thinking were used to achieve surprise victory. The musket phalanx defeated the Huns. It's not too in-depth in terms of strategy. Anyway, the logic can be rounded off, so adjust the product.

At the age of 7 or 8, the design is still too young. Even if you say that ancient feudalism was taught early, it is still too childish to allow such a young person to have so many thoughts.

Lin Daiyu is 6 years old. Anyone who is 10 or 12 years old can understand it. You describe a 6-year-old as if she is 16. It is too dramatic.

The first 50 chapters of this book are actually very average. It gets better and better in the later stages, opening up a new track. It is not like other Red Mansions novels that are always confined to the two mansions, but it is written in the protagonist's own small circle to create the feeling of a garden novel. It's just not enough to watch. It's updated once a day.

Some book reviews are really outrageous. Not to mention having read Dream of Red Mansions, they don't even have a little bit of basic historical knowledge, but they are very brave and dare to speak nonsense. Forcibly applying modern people's thinking to ancient ethics is already the mildest symptom. Asking the escort mission why they didn't just throw away the escort and run out and kill everyone on the other side is already the most rational.

Although there are many female characters in this book, there is only one female protagonist, Lin Daiyu, from beginning to end. The other characters are just icing on the cake, and the male protagonist has no affection for any female counterpart except Lin Daiyu. Overall, the book is pretty good. Although there are some minor flaws, I can still read it.

Lin has too many scenes, which not only compresses the scenes of other heroines, but there are still large parts of Lin's description in the plots of other heroines. The other female protagonists basically didn't stand up, which really affected the perception.

I'm most annoyed by these "de-de" teenagers. They post corrections in the comment area every day, which ruins their good mood. I hope the author can give me some banned words.

Although it is not a masterpiece, it is generally satisfactory without any obvious poisonous points, and it ends smoothly in the end. It is a very good masterpiece.

I really want to know how the protagonist escapes in the end. A duke in his 20s, wouldn't a second emperor be able to endure it? If they are all good emperors, then I have nothing to say, and if the protagonist has no descendants, there is a high probability that he will also die 🙂 First, Daiyu descends (simple and direct violence 😁) Second, holding the emperor in command of the princes, and then directly replacing him (a bit sorry for the big brother, and it is not an exaggeration to say that he is a foster father) Third, bringing his family and his family to follow Baoqin to run abroad (although it is very frustrating, but he can open customization) What else?

The original text says this: Baoyu and Baochai were close at this time, and they could only smell waves of cool and sweet fragrance, but they didn't know what the fragrance was. We all know that Jia Baoyu is the best at this. His sense of smell is very sensitive, and he is especially attentive to the various smells emitted by the women around him, which means he can know women by smell. After Baoyu asked Baochai, he learned that this was not incense, but the fragrance of the cold-flavored pills that Baochai ate. Because he ate them often and for a long time, Baochai would have a scent on his body. This fragrance is cool and sweet, isn't it just Leng Xiang Wan? Because Lengxiang Pills are made from various flowers, honey, and sugar. Through Baoyu's sense of smell, Cao Gong wrote that the fragrance was cool and sweet, with coolness referring to touch and sweetness referring to taste. However, the fragrance Baoyu smelled was clearly olfactory. I have to say that Cao Gong's choice of words was really unexpected. Through touch and taste, the strangeness of the cold fragrance on Baochai is described. Contrary to this, in the nineteenth chapter when Baoyu and Daiyu got along together, Cao Gong also wrote about a fragrance on Daiyu's body. This chapter's chapter is called "The lingering tranquility brings the fragrance of jade." The original text says this: Baoyu never heard these words. He only smelled a faint fragrance, but it came from Daiyu's sleeves. The smell was intoxicating and refreshing. After Baoyu smelled the fragrance in Daiyu's sleeves, he naturally asked where the fragrance came from. Although Daiyu takes medicine, the Ginseng Yangrong Pills, unlike the Lengxiang Pills, are made from various flowers and have fragrance, so they are not medicinal, and the ones given during the twelfth lunar month are not incense. The original text is very clear, not to mention the fragrance of those fragrant cakes, fragrant balls, and fragrant bags. Even Daiyu herself doesn't know it, so there is only one possibility. This is Daiyu's natural body fragrance. Zhiyanzhai commented that Lin Daiyu did not know the fragrance in her flesh and blood. In today's terms, Daiyu's fragrance is body fragrance. It is present at birth. It is not like the fragrance that many girls like to spray perfume and use various cosmetics nowadays. It is purely natural and comes from the flesh and blood. This kind of body fragrance is probably what many girls dream of. At this point, there is a clear difference in fragrance between Chai Dai and Chai Dai. The fragrance of Baochai is not body fragrance, not incense, but medicinal fragrance. Because she had been taking medicine all year round, the Lengxiang Pills entered the body and invaded the bone marrow. Over time, the body naturally developed the aroma of the Lengxiang Pills. It was said to be fragrant, but in fact it was just a medicinal smell. But the fragrance of Daiyu is not incense or other fragrance, but pure body fragrance. Some people should have questions, why does Daiyu have body fragrance? In fact, this is easy to understand. Daiyu's previous life was the Crimson Pearl Immortal Grass. Since it is a fairy grass, it must be a herb that emits fragrance and aroma. The patriotic poet Qu Yuan wrote about "vanilla beauty", which is a perfect way to describe Lin Daiyu in Cao Xueqin's works.

Everyone, stop reading books. After finishing the game, let's read the latest chapter. I really can't stand it anymore 😭😭😭 If you pause for more than thirty seconds to read the latest chapter, you can read it. Friends who have added books to the bookshelf, please help me. The new book period will be over soon, so everyone will read it again 😢😢😢

The love story is well written, but the rest is nonsense.

The case of Fool Xue. Clearly being plotted. It is clearly stated in the original work that he died three days after being carried home. It did not say that the domestic slave was directly beaten to death. However, based on the subsequent plot, it is obvious that someone calculated the Xue family's property and killed someone Feng. Because since the big fool is sentenced to death, his account will be closed. In other words. The Xue family has no male. So, who owns the Xue family's property? In ancient times, women could not inherit family property. Personally, I prefer that after someone brought Feng home, he was killed by someone else, and then the Xue family's property could be calculated.

Finished one book. . From start to finish, there was no crash. . A book without Sister Feng.

After reading Chapter 71 after it was released, this is the reader who can accept the plot of the local officials daring to kill the imperial envoys when the central government is not weakened. 👍 I could not bear to see the three-corpse brain pill that is a powerful alchemy in Chapter 72. The poison takes effect in seconds. 🤔 I won't mention some small poisonous points in the front. These two really numbed me. The rest of the plot and writing are actually okay. If you don't care about this, you can watch it👀

Just like the title, by the way, I saw the portrayal of Wang Xifeng in front of me. Did Wang Xifeng take it? Or give it away?

It's really good. It's the first Red Mansions novel that I've completely read.

The protagonist's life experience is not specified, so he must be an orphan from the royal family, otherwise it would be difficult for him to ascend to the throne.

The reputation of the male protagonist has been ruined by Lin Daiyu She keeps attracting people into the house The defense is not in place.

Liangcao, I can read it. I don't know how it is in the theme of Dream of Red Mansions, but it is okay as a historical novel.

It's the first time I've seen this kind of subject matter, and it's over like this

666 I just finished the book after I kept it up. I didn't notice how fast it was.

Is it almost over? Tonic I just started watching it