Tokyo: I Just Wanted to Write a Book and I Was Surrounded by Them

The author's writing is very beautiful, and the plot inside is full of ups and downs. I was moved to tears when I read it. It's a good book. The praise is over and it's time for me to advertise. Brothers, come and see my novel. I am the author. Although my writing is very spicy, I want to attract traffic.

Neither in love nor in love. Gloomy muttering

The writing is too abstract, the plot line is not clear, and it feels like it is in the clouds. The characters seem to have been deliberately downplayed, and the character traits can even be described in one or two words. . . The focus is all on the work, but the plot actually has no ups and downs, it is simply told in a straightforward manner, which is a bit incredible 🙂🙂

I gave up the book after reading Chapter 145. The first part is really well written, but the second part is hard to describe. The first is Naoko's feelings for the protagonist. I didn't care about this aspect at first, but I couldn't resist your constant writing. When I started to care, you suddenly stopped. From more than ninety pictures, Naoko started to stay away from the protagonist. Up to the one hundred and forty-five chapters I have read now, two people still don't know each other's feelings. I'm really convinced. So why don't you play hide and seek if I can hide you. I think Kyoko's character is well written. I've always wanted to see more explanations of her side of the story, but I haven't written any. Instead, a few veterans are discussing whether to let the protagonist give a speech. If you can write three or four chapters, you really have it!

After reading Chapter 147, I felt that the author was a little sloppy, and the emotional scenes were a bit delayed. The protagonist was obviously determined to have a showdown with Zhizi, but he vaguely said that he liked someone, without saying that the person was Zhizi. The character image expressed in the previous pages of Zhizi was quite good. The image of the enthusiastic big sister became depressed after being fooled by the "psychiatrist" in the later period. Moreover, the description length was greatly reduced, and the character image was unclear. Sakura Izumi's mission image initially described her as an iceberg beauty, but her personality changed a bit later, like a secretly poking "venomous snake". Furthermore, her admiration for Kafka's literary qualities was a bit deliberate. She was originally a small editor, and she worshiped the protagonist's literary works too much. (Maybe I have not appreciated the literary works created by the protagonist and cannot feel the shock of his words), but I still feel a bit embarrassed. The above is my humble opinion. But I still quite like this book.

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What is written behind this?

Did the author let himself go? How come you have such a bad job like amnesia?

It's very good, nothing toxic, and it looks quite relaxing. I gave you a monthly pass, please add fines 🤭

So far, I agree with the author's novel aesthetic. At least there are no retarded plots about dragons in writers' novels, and there is no poorly written Dazai Osamu Kawabata Yasunari. I support a

The first part is fine, but the later part becomes more and more abstract. I don't know what I want to write about. There are too many daily and emotional combinations. If this is what you want to write about, then you should change your name. Now it's really a mess. I write one stroke here and one stroke west.

In two words, boring (┯_┯)

The conflicts between the characters are a bit too bizarre. You must know that black and red are also red. The most important thing for a new writer is fame. If the work is not discussed, it will just disappear into the public eye. If you really want to write something bizarre, you might as well try magical realism

It's so awkward. The main character seems to have no brains.

What I wrote after I lost my memory was a mess, and the change of person perspective in the middle was really disgusting. I seriously doubt that someone was changed in the middle.

Unconstrained ideas Old-fashioned techniques Mediocre writing Confusing development

Good book, seedling, if you are afraid, give me a ticket first

The quality is not good It looks like a systematic article - what book to copy is just a task name, and you just rely on completing this "task" to achieve the purpose of pretending to be a slap in the face and making money to pick up girls To put it bluntly, when I saw the protagonist Wenqing at the beginning, I thought it was the image of the author projecting himself into it. Although it is quite difficult to write something written by a person who is too literary, but in fact, to put it nicely, this book is obviously a pure business article, and the routines are fixed. Just fill in the titles of a few copied xx books, and then replace their introductions.

Hey, the first 50 chapters were quite interesting, but then it suddenly became boring.

There is also a record of the protagonist's rhythmic second-game circle.

Did it change back to third person later?

For example: The writing style is very Japanese. The style of ancient Japanese novels makes you feel as if you are reading The Tale of Genji (laughs)