People in the World Are Proud of the Heavens

There are a lot of problems. In Swordsman Out of Huashan, he actually used a gun. His internal organs were exhausted and he didn't look for Ping Yi Zhi. He was just making soy sauce in the plot!

The writing is a bit like a running account, and the description of the protagonist is not detailed enough.

While saying that his life is not long, he wanders around

Open three books at the same time, the typewriter becomes perfect

It turned out to be Juankerlou. After reading several Tomato books, I couldn't find the organization.

When entering Huashan, the weapon is a gun. Talented writers, go use your guns in Thailand.

The Huashan faction uses guns a little bit. . . It's normal for you to use a knife. After all, people also have Liangyi knife skills. . . But Swordsman is indeed the most exciting in the Golden Book. Fighting in Tianlong is basically with bare hands. You Tanzhi has basically never practiced any good moves. Xu Zhu has practiced Tianshan martial arts, but for a very short time. These two have actually become the great masters in Tianlong. . . What does this mean? Tianlong's move is to pull the crotch, relying entirely on internal strength to hit people. Looking at Xiaoao again, all of them are carrying swords, big Songyang hands, heart-destroying palms, and towering hands. These are the secret skills of famous masters. . . . Then people basically use weapons! What does this mean? I still can't defeat weapons with my bare hands! Among weapons, swords and guns are like little brothers. It shows that the idea of ​​using a gun with pig's feet is correct, but it is not right to become a disciple of Huashan. . .

Everyone wants to make a living in the online literary world, but it's not that easy. Some people eat delicacies from mountains and seas, some eat a lot of fish and meat, some have enough food and clothing, and naturally there are also people who can't eat three meals a day.

It's really well written. The characters have distinct and vivid personalities. It's a pity that the author wrote too much and can't take it back. When I realized that it had deviated from the outline, I didn't know how to finish it, so I cut it. 😅 What a pity.

I've read ten chapters and it's very well written. Why Mao Yaoqie? Don't care about Internet trolls.