Detective Conan: This Officer Is Way Too Skilled in Combat

I hope the protagonist of this book is not a pervert, and the heroine must not be Haihara Ai again. Nowadays, the heroine of Conan fan fiction is Haihara Ai, and I almost vomited. Nine out of ten Conan books have heroines named Haihara Ai. Even if some of the heroines are not Haihara Ai, the protagonists in them also treat Haihara Ai as a princess. I really don't understand why Haihara Ai is that good? There are a lot of women in Detective Conan who are more miserable than Haibara Ai

What kind of ghost could pull off such a plot? The instructor was hoisted up. The two of them stepped on the shoulder height. Instead of quickly finding a ladder, they went to assemble a firearm, find a bullet, and wanted to shoot off the rope. A large group of police academy students, even if you use a personal ladder 😅 The protagonist was thoughtful during the process because others said that he was quick to assemble and had a strong fist. He was a bit pretentious.

Previously, it was more appropriate for Makino to call Megure the police department, but here, although Megure is older, it is not appropriate to call someone with a higher position than himself, the brother. Japanese professional titles are still relatively serious, and now the protagonist Makino's position is a police officer, and he will not do everything personally like the police department or the police department. Some small cases are handed over to the people below to handle, and subordinates must always be given a chance. Those with more serious plots and difficult cases can almost be handled personally. After all, now he has a reputation.

The protagonist is a graduate of Tokyo University, but it is not stable enough. It is better to add a graduate of the Faculty of Law. Nine of the ten top police officers are graduates of the University of Tokyo, and among these nine, 7 are graduates of the Faculty of Law.

The heroine is Suzuki Ayako. One thing to say is that Suzuki Ayako's face is too obvious and she is not as good-looking as her mother. Her mother is more beautiful😋

Author, your plot jumps too fast... It gives me the feeling that I don't know how to write without being separated from the original work, and I want to get into the main plot immediately. As a result, all the other supporting characters were written like tool men. Obviously there is a lot more to be written about the police academy, but in the end, there is no change at all when the protagonist is inserted. I need to write more about the comrades-in-arms and let the protagonist have some chemical reactions. If you want to write Ayako as the heroine, you should dig deeper and write at least some emotional scenes. And why does the protagonist suddenly change his appearance? Why did you contact the FBI? How come the protagonist is not a management officer but suddenly confronts a winery? It's not like you're setting up a suspense, it's like you're preparing the eunuch to just lay out the outline. There is no need to rush into the main story of Conan and skip all the places that should be written. You are already on alert now that you have only written 100,000 words.

The gangsters kidnapped hostages and just called a bunch of police academy students and left? Going without any equipment? What's even more outrageous is that the teacher knew about it and still covered it up? Don't say that the Conan police are useless. No matter how much they say, they are regular law enforcement agencies and they are equipped with weapons and equipment.

I've only read Chapter 5 and there are a lot of people criticizing Matsuda. Is your book aimed at so many primary school students?

When it comes to Nergigante, we have to tell a story about traveling to the end of the world with your beloved🤓

I hope the heroine is Reiko Akiba, her new name is Kahori, Asami Uchida