Douluo Dalu: I Changed the Narration, and Everyone Went Mad!

[The plot is completely off the rails!] + [Overpowered, Pure Thrills!] + [Make Tang San suffer] + [Make Bibi Dong suffer] + [Make the Grandmaster suffer] + [Make the protagonist group suffer] Two and a half minutes after Shen He transmigrates to Douluo Dalu, he activates the System and gains the ability to see and edit the plot’s narration. But his edits send the whole of Douluo Dalu further and further into madness... [Li Yusong checks Shen He’s Martial Soul. Shen He’s Martial Soul is his body.] Shen He waves a hand, changing “body” directly to “Sacred Body,” and gains the Desolate Ancient Sacred Body Martial Soul. [Tang San releases his Blue Silver Grass Martial Soul, leaving everyone nearby amazed.] With a thought, Shen He changes “Blue Silver Grass” to “Blue Silver Pig,” and Tang San is mistaken for Yu the Grandmaster’s illegitimate son. [Tang San attacks in a rage, using Buddha’s Fury Tang Lotus on you...] Shen He gives a wicked smile. [Buddha’s Fury Tang Lotus] turns straight into [Buddha’s Fury Flame Lotus]. Unable to control the power of the Heavenly Flames, Tang San is blasted into the sky and turned into fireworks! (The blurb doesn’t do it justice. Read the story.)