Versatile Mage: Punch in and Become a God

At present, the probability that the author will fail is a bit high. There are a lot of typos and they haven't been corrected very much. Then there are segmentation errors. Of course, these problems can be big or small. The key point is that the author is not a new author, right? And there are still some places where the writing is not smooth. It doesn't look too poisonous. At least not yet.

I'm personally curious about why Tang Yue is so attractive? Almost most full-time fandoms assume that she is the first female protagonist? Personally a little surprised

It's okay to write about Tang Yue, but the feelings you describe, this isn't fucking feelings, it's disgusting, you don't have to write if you don't know how to write.

It's quite speechless. The dragon-taming Shi family went to fight dragon eggs. They didn't have any brains. Originally, people made money by selling them, but they also went to gamble to make money. The dragon eggs belonged to other people and they didn't know what they were.

It's okay, just too little.

Fantasy revision, mutual help, collected

The national costume is really boring, like a child playing house

I said before that I should remain content with you. Take a look at what you have written. It is not a big deal.

? ? ? ? , What situation 😰 is this a eunuch? ? ? ?

How does it feel like Tomato AI, there is a brain storage place in the first chapter...

The author hopes that the heroine is not from the Mu family. After reading a lot of this kind of novel, the heroines of the same novel are all Mu Nujiao and many of them are. The heroine almost vomited. When I saw this heroine, I lost my temper. I really didn't want to read it. I was disgusted and disgusted. I hope this book doesn't have this heroine. It's okay if you don't write a heroine. It's acceptable if you create your own heroine. Just don't mess with Mu Nujiao.

Author, how many words do you have per chapter? How many times do you update it every day? I am also writing a French fanfic. It has not been released yet. It has been two days of writing. It is only 15,000 words now. I will write two chapters tonight and it will be estimated to be 20,000 words.

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