Become a God: Start by Getting a Recommendation for Practice

When writing about the prehistoric times, you are right to introduce qi into the body and practice qi to transform into a spirit. The qi training period and the foundation building period are too much. It's not an efficiency issue, it's a logic issue

Everyone who traveled through time to become a god robbed the unlucky old Xiao Sheng from Wuyi Mountain 😒😒

The protagonist is seriously mentally ill and has no brainer!

Like a fool, he used his life to fight against Zheng Lun's magical power of the nose. As a result, his soul was injured. He can only say that the author has a bug and forced his wits to fall. Otherwise, there is no ability to resist. There is also Chong Heihu, who knows that his family should cooperate with others, but does not take action. He only waits for the other party to attack and rob his parents. It is really a mentally retarded plot.

Many plots are completely unreasonable. Chong Heihu inquired about you at the banquet table. In exchange, you took the opportunity to ask him to bring out the Iron-billed Condor. He couldn't refuse at all. Didn't you get another treasure? Then they communicate and watch each other's magical powers, and a few more magical powers. If they insist on designing a mentally retarded plot, the author can't grasp the plot at all, and he will definitely pounce on it.

Does the protagonist accept any women? Also accept the concubines of King Zhou?

There is a high probability that I will enter the palace. It doesn't look good. I write whatever comes to my mind. My brain is not online 😒😒😒😒

Chapter 2: Poison, the fourth time I read it, the three major Dantians are set to be extremely poisonous, and almost all of them have no sense of immersion.

If you open the golden finger too much, and the protagonist doesn't know how to use it, the excitement will turn into poison, and the sense of expectation will be reduced by more than half.

Magical weapons are too casual. Isn't it a joke that you, a loose immortal, have something that even the Xuanyuan Water Flag Saint is coveted?

There are too many weird authors these days. It can't be love writing. It's here to make quick money. I want to be original but can't produce reasonable original writing. In the end, it's all different.

Romantic dramas nowadays are quite annoying, I personally don't like them 🙂

I've already written a book, why do I still feel so uncomfortable writing it? . .

The more you write, the more hopeless you become. Are you watching a show? You write death stories so quickly, how the protagonist wants to die, and you need so many magic weapons. It takes a lot of time to deal with the best innate spiritual treasures for an immortal, and to refine the forbidden spiritual treasures. You can't build a stable place, and watch people beheaded one by one. How long is the time? Hui, one yuan will last 10,800 years, one yuan will last 12, and one yuan will last 129,600 years. This is a prehistoric style that does not count years. I am speechless.

I didn't even persist in the second chapter, poisonous

It's a bit lacking, and I can't retain readers. It doesn't feel appropriate to explain how to teach the Twelve Golden Immortals for tens of thousands of years. Writing this way feels like a low-profile version of the Great Desolation. I became a disciple before the Twelve Golden Immortals and Lich War. How can I get a hundred thousand years online?

The more I watch, the more boring I become. If I don't watch Tai Chi Tu and the Divine Whip, there are 72 changes that are not changes, 72 kinds of creatures.

The golden finger is opened too big, and it is taken in front of others, and it falls from the sky! Afraid that others don't know

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

The author arranges a jade unicorn mount for the protagonist and then fuses the Sea God Needle and the Mountain God Ax into the Fangtian Painted Halberd and the reverse scale armor made of the reverse scales of ten thousand golden dragons.