Return to the Age of Seventeen and Start an Anti-Routine Life

Some comments: ① The main characters in the first few chapters are a little greasy. I took a peek at the female protagonist's breasts. I would like to make a suggestion. Youth novels should not describe too much about women's body complexes. I'm sure you can read this one. There is a book called "Warm Monsoon" that has the same problem as you wrote. The first chapter makes a dirty joke, "If a woman lowers her head and cannot see her toes, she is the worst in the world." "Sex", and then I stopped reading ② Later I went to an Internet cafe to smoke cigarettes quite skillfully, and in the front there was a description of the protagonist with long hair and fighting. When will I see a book with a different protagonist setting? It seems that many of them are rebirths such as "gangsters", "ruffians", and "old oilers". Is the target group of rebirth love stories this kind of user? Increase the sense of immersion? ③ Various inappropriate memes, the ones I saw include "Mermaid" and "Let the Bullets Fly". The integration is very stiff and looks a bit dramatic ④ The part about selling box lunches in the Internet cafe is awkward. One is to ask the boss who sells box lunches to follow you and let him know where you sell the box lunches; the other is not to go online in advance. I did some research at a bar and found out that the boss wouldn't let me sell it. I caught a minor on the spur of the moment and forced the network administrator to let me sell it. This made it look like the protagonist's inscrutable statement about 'integrating resources' was a clown and failed to show off. Of course, there are also some good points in the writing: ① Tell the two teenagers about the rebirth. I thought it was hidden before I watched it, but I didn't expect it. I told my friends about the college entrance examination papers and worked together to see if we could keep it secret together. The second female lead's family background is said to be very good. We don't want the second female lead to pass on the news revealed by the protagonist to her family... ② It's not ambiguous. I told the second female lead about dating in the future, and immediately cut off, saying that we will only be brothers in this life. Good reviews The above are all personal opinions. If you have different ideas, you can also discuss them. It is not easy for a young female protagonist to be single. Come on, author! 😳