We've All Been Reborn, Shouldn't We Have a Few More Sisters?

There are too many unnecessary descriptions and the impression is very poor.

The writing is okay, there's nothing toxic about it for the time being.

The long paragraph describing the female character is quite boring. It will only make people feel dumb. Just put a picture to make it more engaging (AI pictures are not good, and the faces on the Internet are all the same, which makes it more uncomfortable)

Until now, she is just a girl. How many sisters are there?

This sister named Qiao is really too ignorant.

Isn't there still 110,000 left in the stock market?

Inexplicably, another woman appears. As mentioned earlier, the male protagonist likes Sister Qiao a lot, but the female lawyer has no follow-up. The protagonist's emotional outlook is too fragmented.

There is no main line, the mind is uncertain, and the details are not described well. Do this business today, do that business tomorrow, and drive with one hand in the capital. The key is that you don't have a car. Too messy

Doing business in one place or another, going to school in Shijiazhuang, buying a shop in Beijing and selling milk tea? ? ?