The Rise of Jia Cong in Red Mansions

This book is very well written, especially in creating the atmosphere. Running a newspaper is the only one in the Red Mansion novels I have read that is not embarrassing. Leaving the Jia Mansion relatively early, of course, left a foreshadowing of the Jia Mansion coming to ask for help. Overall, it is a good product in the novel Red Mansions that is not funny. The treatment of Lin Daiyu is more distinctive in that the protagonist's reasons are a bit upright and upright. Ignoring this, the direction of the story is still very comfortable. The frequency of pleasure is acceptable, there should be multiple girls, but there is no trend of studs yet. I don't like stallions. The problem with accepting everyone I meet is that most of them don't have enough emotional foreshadowing. The biggest problem of this book is the slow pace. The feeling of catching up is that other books have a piece of meat every day, but this book only has two pieces of minced meat every day 😅 Although the frying is good, the heat is enough, and it is not a random stir-fry 😥

It's almost schizophrenic. Every chapter says that he doesn't want to have anything to do with the people in Rongguo Mansion, but he still enjoys the treatment of Rongguo Mansion. Is it difficult to show his attitude and make people hate him? You said you want to keep a distance from the Jia family while studying hard for the imperial examination. You, the son of Jia He, want to get rid of such a relationship. You are very naive.

It's not like this! If you don't like Lin Daiyu, stay away from her! You must make the protagonist look like White Lotus! Don't blame me, it was all forced by Lin Ruhai and the others. The protagonist couldn't stand the ancient rules, so he got married and then made all kinds of shame after the marriage. It's really amazing! The most disgusting thing is that during the wedding ceremony, Daiyu was mistaken for Qingwen! How could anyone mistake his wife for someone else during the wedding night? The writing is so disgusting! Don't tell me, in ancient times it was the parents who ordered the matchmaker. This is a novel you wrote and the plot is completely within your control. If you don't want to write like this, no one can force you. You are just being disgusting on purpose!

It's really good, but after reading so many fics, I just want to say to the author that a pig's foot who has traveled through time really doesn't have much friendship with them, unless the pig's foot is interested in their flesh and blood, and for the sake of lust, he will try his best to hold on to them, and he will not be ungrateful to you if you are good, and he will step on you if you are bad. There is no such thing as fairness, unfairness, and family affection! At that time, their lives were already very rare. They really needed to be saved. There were so many prostitutes in the brothel who were beautiful and good at playing, but they would not get angry with you. You could do whatever you wanted. Who the hell has time to make them happy in a day when life is so short?

After reading the previous dozens of chapters, every few chapters it was written that the protagonist does not want to be favored by the Jia family, and does not want to have anything to do with the Jia family. I am really convinced. If you are so aloof, you must first cut off your own food, clothing, housing and transportation. Don't go to the family studies, don't ask for pens, inks, papers and inkstones. By the way, in ancient times, the imperial examination required a guarantor, so don't let your family find someone to be your guarantor, and filial piety was the most important thing in ancient times. He said, "Don't have anything to do with your family. Then don't hang out in the circle of scholars. They don't care about your reasons. I will consider you to have passed the exam and become an official. As a result, the political enemies of the Jia family targeted you. The allies of the Jia family knew the inside story and isolated you. You were high and low and you hid in the countryside and sat on a rocking chair. As a result, the Jia family committed a crime and you are still on the exile list."

It's good to write like this. Seeing him building a tall building, seeing him entertaining guests, seeing his building collapsing, he didn't expect Lin Daiyu to come, so he immediately started licking her, feeling that he was the savior and wanted to save her, so he just watched quietly, just like a passer-by.

Ah, when I watched A Dream of Red Mansions, I didn't find the women in the Red Mansions so annoying. Why do these women in your works lose the background of the tragedy of feudal ethics and have a bit more of the temperament of modern little fairies? The more I look at them, the more disgusting they become.

One question, why do authors like to add the image of a unruly princess (the same goes for the group leader)? What role does this image play in promoting the plot and shaping the characters? It's just a simple question. After all, this image keeps appearing, and I'm a little confused.

What do you think about those who write about the Jia family taking in Lin? They are blood relatives, let alone the reason of ancient people. After all, they are written by modern people and can be read by modern people.

If there is something wrong with Lin Daiyu, forget it. Shi Xiangyun still refused to follow the lead in the first two chapters. He neither thought the protagonist was good nor wanted to be a minor. She had no choice but to be married off, which made her fall in love with my concubine again, leaving me speechless.

Okay, won't you delete the comment? Or setting a fan value or something. I read a little bit and there was nothing wrong with it, but when I read the comments, I felt they were all scolding, so I stopped reading. I suggest you add a fan or something, so that at least there won't be people like me who read the comments to persuade you to quit.

Every day I think about putting aside the Jia family. You eat and drink from the Jia family. The martial arts that the Jia family provides for you to study are still inherited from the ancestors of the Jia family. They are still the sons of Jia She. You just throw it away. You are fooling and standing up. It's really a good thing and you run away. Without the Jia family, you still don't know how to live.

The author is really doing harm. You forced Daiyu to hang herself. The jade belt was hung in the forest. According to the verdict,

Cold violence against a sensitive person like Lin Daiyu is an attempt to force her to death. The protagonist is still addicted to cannibalism

I can't say directly. Please just read Chapters 8 and 9. I almost thought I was reading an online article from a few years ago. How many people have such patience now?

Summary: 🐢The male protagonist is a double-standard male protagonist. He talks about not licking and being independent, but he only cares about the three inches of snow in front of the door. In action, he acts like a big cock in heat, wishing that the golden hairpin would only revolve around him.

The protagonist is pedantic and a bit stupid, not at all like a modern person

In the ancient clan system, Jia Zong, the direct line of offenders, could not avoid it at all, even if he was a concubine. The underlying logic of the entire article does not make sense. It may be another palace novel.

I won't watch Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles without you 😆 (Avoid the edge, be patient) There is a difference between being a coward and a coward. You can just go to Jia's side and 'accidentally' reveal something. Lao Deng pooped on you, and even pooped twice in a row. You also understand Lao Meng's reasons for being unscrupulous.

How come the more I watch, the more the protagonist looks like a psychopath!

No, buddy, I just suggest you stop writing Ghost Blows Out the Lamp and instead write Strange Stories from a Chinese Studio. You can also delete your comments.

Returning the money is a proper thing to do, but in the book, various forces have added insult to injury. Is it to highlight the protagonist's current predicament, or is it to reflect the emperor's ruthlessness and unkindness? After the money is paid off, what should you, the author, rely on to advance the plot? To be honest, I'm a little tired of this fixed pattern. When something goes wrong in the Jia family, the protagonist comes forward to reveal the truth. This is a common routine in Red Mansions fan fiction, but it is really nothing new at all. Furthermore, if the emperor is set to be Yongzheng, what role will the protagonist play? Is it possible to do the opposite?

I've read Chapter 251. I won't mention all the typos before. In the refugee camp of 50,000 to 60,000 people, the victims are still coming in. The female family members of the protagonist's family actually come in as a group to play, and the protagonist even leads the tour with a proud look on his face. This is really a trick of wisdom, I gave up the book!

Age is a big flaw. She has already taken the entrance exam, but Lin Daiyu hasn't come yet, and the protagonist is younger than Xichun.

There is a problem with the timeline setting at the beginning of this book. Which dynasty has only been in existence for more than 20 years, and can it match the social form of the original Dream of Red Mansions? There is absolutely no character setting, characterization, or profiling of personality traits. Except for the protagonist going crazy from time to time and making up nonsense, the author's own thoughts and opinions are completely invisible. The plot of the story is full of inconsistencies, with frequent typos and modern internet vocabulary thrown into the mix. I hope the author will reorganize the outline, look up more information about ancient rituals, laws and regulatory systems, and read more explanations of famous books if there is time. As for this book, it is just for practice. I still need to read more good original literary works and think more about it. I wish the author will get better and better and prosper!

Seeing that Xiangyun is a concubine, you can't stand it anymore. Do you think it's reasonable for the legitimate daughter of the Hou Mansion to give you a sixth-grade official as your concubine? Open a harem just open a harem, do it so unwillingly, and pretend and act

The writing is quite good, but I read all the VIP chapters in one sitting. Come on.

Ignoring various unreasonable details, the first hundred or so chapters are pretty good. The strange thing is that after more than a hundred chapters, the trial plot begins, with all kinds of typos and misuse of idioms. Is this written by a primary school student?

No update for 2 days, no explanation, are you a eunuch?

Boss, are you still planning to update?🤓, check ten times a day to see if it has been updated.