The Health Bar of This Sword Immortal Is Too Thick!

It's my first time to write a book. How should I put it? I was very excited after it was signed. I have also read many novels. But for the first time, I don't deny that what I wrote is indeed rubbish. It is indeed a piece of shit. People will always make progress. I have to work during the summer vacation every day and think about the plot and code at night at home. I am tired but also very fulfilled every day. Thank you to these thousand brothers for their collection, and thank you to the brothers who criticized me and scolded me, because you let me know where I am lacking and where I need to learn. Finally, thank you all very much. This book will not be easily read. I will study it carefully and think about the follow-up content!

I've read Chapter 20. What can I say? The description has no sense of picture.

Haha, I updated five chapters today, which is considered a small explosion. Although the writing is not very good, it will definitely not fool the audience. Also, it will be on the shelves tomorrow, brothers, don't abandon the book! I will go to the editor to recommend a book with a million words for free. If you are willing to spend money, you can order it. If you are not willing, you can save it and read it when it becomes free.

Since the author is only a freshman, he doesn't usually have a lot of time to type. If any brothers see typos, they can long press and give feedback. Thank you brothers. Gui Gu would like to thank all of you for this! !

The text is very comfortable to read. The writing is really good.

Killed 4,999 monsters in forty years, that's awesome

I always feel that it is inexplicable and a bit confusing.

Regarding the two typos, they have been corrected today. Thank you to the reader, Grandpa, for your feedback. I have exceeded 800 collections today, so I will add one more update!

Brothers, this book has been successfully internally invested, and the time limit is two days. No matter the investment, as for the update, two chapters a day are 2,500. If you charge more than 100, I will explode one chapter. Okay.

Doesn't it really hurt to not have a percentage? No matter how thick the health bar is, you will be honest when encountering a percentage of real damage.

I like Sword Fairy, but I don't read harem stories.

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

I have read about ten chapters. Overall, it looks like Diaosi Wen, but the writing style is slightly better than traditional Diaosi Wen.

It's 300,000 words, why isn't it on the shelves yet?

The introduction is too simple, so that won't work. The first sentence is fine, but you have to add content later and talk about the general plot. There are too few people in the comment area and it's embarrassing.