Man in North America, Sin Busters

It is recommended to change the protagonist's surname from Ao to Yao to ensure that it is very popular. Wouldn't it be great to call it "Yao west"? 🙂

If it were Nemesis of Justice, more people would watch it.

Are all American bad guys Chinese? Damn, I saw dozens of photos showing Chinese committing crimes. What I know is that you are reminding the Chinese people that there are bad people among overseas Chinese. What I don't know is that you have some deep hatred for the Chinese.

We are all Americans. What are we doing talking about China every day? Don't you get a new background when reading this kind of novel? No wonder there are not even 100 comments.

If you don't understand, just ask, is the protagonist a time traveler? Are you Chinese? Then what does the life and death of the gringo matter to you? And you were tricked and almost died just after you went there. Do you still think of yourself as the nemesis of evil after such an encounter? Do you want to be a policeman and work for gringos? Do you really think racial discrimination is a joke? Being a killer is better than being a policeman!

I have the writing skills and the writing is okay, so I can read it. However, there is a very serious question, what is the main line? Upgrading skills is extraordinary but doesn't look like it, having fun isn't much fun, and having gun battles every day but without a main story seems very scattered. . . If it doesn't work, it would be okay to upgrade it to an officialdom, but I didn't get promoted after seeing it on the shelves. . . The main line is not clear. Another problem is that for the heroine, it's okay to be a sex partner with someone who slept with her for the first time, but now she doesn't look like a sex partner or a girlfriend. .

I saw Chapter 65 Writing about America, Pig's Feet has a single female protagonist? When I make an appointment with a Chinese guy, I become my girlfriend and we stay together every day! ! This is not American at all, not what we like to watch, but the rest is fine. I just can't write about women. The plot of shooting every day is okay. If you kill more, you have to make money. It's like embezzlement. Just killing people and having fun is not enough! Get more women

All criminal suspects who meet the protagonist will die. This is when everyone is a fool.

If you are really the killer of crime, kill those congressmen, CIA, FBI, and Jews!

Your plug-in is no different if it is enabled or not. You won't withdraw the reward even if you get it, or even forget it. You are really suppressing it to death...

It is written that the American police are so dedicated, they have not been practicing for many years, they work overtime almost every other day, their income is low, and their casualty rate is high.

The protagonist is really naive and hates evil. If you have the ability to arrest the CIA and the government, it is legal for them to sell leaves. They are the biggest poisoners. Go and arrest them.

Sin Buster, so what is sin? Does provoking a war count, does economic plunder count?

Too bland. No ups and downs. There are so many skirmishes that I'm getting tired of watching them. Main line? Feel better?

I hope that the protagonist will be more hands-on and less talkative. In addition, in foreign plots, some domestic thinking must be discarded to avoid being nondescript.

It's not cool enough. It's systematic like this. You're not afraid of cheating, but you're afraid it's not big enough. Just go on a killing spree. You can get rewards for killing people. Why don't you kill him? They're all scum anyway. Why are dogs so sneaky? You've already killed dozens of them. If you catch them, you'll be jailed. You might as well become stronger as soon as possible. When you don't eat beef, you'll have a great Confucian debate.

Dude, you can even give the protagonist a mixed-race Asian identity, a Chinese who goes to the United States to become a police officer. What do you think

In fact, the author was shot to death by a black man on the roadside in the United States, so he couldn't write it.

When that balance car came out, I really wanted to give it up. Why don't you just ask for an atomic bomb?

I have been following this book for a long time. I usually save up to read it once a week. I opened it today and found that there was no update 😭.

In fact, I like this book very much. I feel it is much more interesting than other cool articles that only just kill and kill or directly copy American TV series, especially the many life plots. I hope you will not be a eunuch and subscribe to the full book.

The book is good, but updates are slow

Abandoned. Not cool enough. Not strong enough. 886

What a pity. Such a good result was cut off. The author's mentality is really fragile. Writing a book requires persistence, and the author is still young (still rich) 👍

Brother, I ordered everything on QQ Reading and you became a eunuch 😅

I'm not happy, I'm a shark, not as good as a shark, I'm just keeping in good health, I've got the system, what's the difference between you and ordinary people, you can treat 140 sharks a day like fishing for French fries in the delta, it's more fun and interesting than this. Going to a foreign country with a gun and a system is just for fun. Otherwise, what do you want to do? It's really boring. I feel so unhappy after comparison.

I don't want to think about becoming a police officer! ! !

Do police officers enforce the law alone? Don't write too falsely!

I thought it was pretty good, but it ended suddenly without any explanation, and I will start a new book right away.

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