Diao Nu's Counterattack in Red Mansion

To be honest, if you write like this, you will be popular. Of course, if you just write what you want to write, then just pretend that I didn't say anything. I caught you from the front and it is a must-read. It is really dull and boring. There is no conflict, no opposition, and no drama. How can this be so satisfying? Even if the later part is finished and the first part is so bland, how many people will read it to the end? As for the allusions to reality, I think it's nonsense. Your level as the author is not that high, and the reader's level of appreciation is not that high either. Many people read Red Mansions fan fiction or novels just for fun and entertainment. All I can say is wish the author a happy writing.

Awesome. The protagonist is a slave. His appearance is a popular face. He has a beautiful and fragrant golden hairpin. He is really awesome. He deserves to be a loser.

I haven't read it yet. This identity is only threatening and coercive. The protagonist also needs to have invincible force. Otherwise, it would be unrealistic to write about falling in love. I don't know how this book will be.

Forehead. . The titles of each chapter are very imaginative, but the content is watery and uninspiring. Watch it first and see what happens next.

I have read other novels about Diao Slave Rider in Red Mansions, and I hope this one is as good as those two.

First of all, this is an imaginary novel. Those who are interested in archeology, please understand the word imaginary first. Secondly, many people criticize the slave as not worthy of a golden hairpin or something. The slave is just the origin of the protagonist. His identity will slowly change due to his own efforts and opportunities, just like most people like to watch mortals die. Also, the protagonist is not considered Wei Guangzheng. After all, the time traveler is still a well-behaved person, so there is no way to write about it. Most of the people there are paid for their kidneys, and only a small part of them are paid for their hearts. Discussions are also welcome, any cursing comments will be deleted.

It feels like being a slave all the time, just changing masters.

Not bad, but I don't know how long it will take to get out of citizenship.

I have collected it and haven't read it since I'm waiting to get deregistered. I saw it today and I finally took it off, but it was a bit wet and I don't know how it went.

If you want to write about depth, don't write about depth with the theme of Red Mansions; If you want to write about ancient romance, don't write about Red Mansions, because the character's identity is too low and it's a bit hilarious.

There are still many problems at the moment. The most important ones at the moment are that the characterization is not deep enough and the updates are too slow. Now I only remember the arithmetic that was taken away from me earlier. Secondly, there is too little interaction and daily life with Jin Chai, and the protagonist's status upgrade is still too slow at present. According to this situation, it can be written about a thousand and five chapters, of course, it is not a supervisory situation. Finally, there is the problem of typos. To be honest, there are a lot of them. Just in the last few pictures, one of them has 7-8 typos. This is the biggest problem I can see.

It's not like following the trend, right? When one book of Li Gui comes out, a lot of Li Gui emerge, right?

The most important issue is family background. It's okay if you don't enter the officialdom. When you enter the officialdom, others will check your identity. You are a slave of the Jia family. Where do you put the emperor? At least on the surface, ministers can only have one master, who is the emperor. It's okay for a small official. You can't do anything for a small official. Your peers will also laugh at you. Even if you seek refuge with others, how do others think you are focusing on two things? If you don't recognize the first one, you are a repeat villain. Family background is very important.

Uncle Xiao Huang😍😍😍

To be honest, if you really traveled through time and became this minion Goldfinger, at least become a martial arts master like that. This world is just an ordinary world, there are no immortals or gods, and the level of martial arts is at the level of ordinary people. Then the system, if you have that kind of extraordinary skill, you will at least be invincible and free and easy.

Support, I am a long-time Tomato fan, and I hope Qidian readers will be discerning.