Peerless Tang Sect: I Am the Village Chief in Douluo

You are writing a flow of summoning players, so the focus is on the players, and the players' laughter is the main point. However, there is basically no interaction in the following chapters, and even the figures are missing. There are only 5 players at the beginning, so it seems that there is no problem whether there are players or not.

I think it's better to hide behind the scenes. You seem a bit too arrogant.

Many authors today do not have character descriptions, environment descriptions, and psychological descriptions. How do they do this? It makes me so uncomfortable!

The book reviews said that the players of this book are in the order-good camp. However, in reality, the player camp is generally chaos-evil. Because it is a game, the players have no sense of morality at all. This is just like the classic Japanese RPG game. Entering a villager's house is like rummaging through boxes and cabinets. , If you want to write well and have a lot of work to do, most players do all kinds of tricks, such as speed pass bugs, teasing NPCs, and doing the opposite if the NPC says it. The most typical ones are Stanley's Prophecy from abroad, and Ashe from China.

The essence of Jiang Nannan's character lies in the back door. Jiang Nannan who has not been breasted by Xu Sanshi is incomplete, just like Bibi Dong who has not been in the secret room.

It is better to write about Zhang Lexuan, Meng Hongchen and Xiaoxiao than to write about Jiang Nannan. When writing about Xiaoxiao, the one with more imagination is the Human Emperor.

I think it would be better if you just delete the players directly. Player streams basically don't discuss reality, especially when you have an official version. Your novel has strayed from the theme. Player streams focus on the cooperation between players, trap stream, summon stream, Gou Dao stream. Various ideas are endless. Now it has 160,000 people and the plot is nearly half, but it is basically the protagonist plus the original character. As for the players, they are like NPCs and have no sense of existence compared to the protagonist group.

I feel that the players you wrote have too much sense of order and lack some chaos. It would be interesting if you added some elements of sitting and forgetting

Really, ex as always, Snake is worthy of being a shit Nike

The Xuantian Treasure Records in your auction are all incomplete. How can I say they are original? Some of the original things are in the eyes of Binghuo Liangyi, and the Tanghulu will not leave the original ones.

No, your update speed is not worthy of the monthly tickets and recommendation tickets that readers give you. It hasn't been put on the shelves yet, that's all.

Recommend a novel - Peerless Tang Sect: My Dragon King Simulator (formerly known as Peerless Tang Sect: My Simulation of the Dragon King Legend)

Author bacteria, you are so slow! ! !

I think you can still watch it even if it's not online. After all, it's free. If you pay for it, I personally don't think it's very cost-effective. After all, the system panel is only 3 pages, and it's about players. But I feel that the players the author wrote about are very small after all. Don't say what the proportion is. Even if it's less than 50%, it's still a waste of players.

If you want to experience the 100% realistic simulation of the Douluo world, then please fill in your personal attribute panel. The village chief will quickly review and issue the places for the internal test. The places are limited and first come, first served. ——Star Guard Douluo Game Company

This book is very well written, but there is another book that I can still read - Douluo Peerless: Life Simulator

Return Xuanwu Pill, Return Xuanshui Pill, he, tui

After reading four chapters, I remember that the last time I read this type of subject was the book Novice Village Chief. However, it is obvious that the rhythm is a little wrong. The most important thing is that this kind of game novels usually focus on various game players coming to change and do various things, and you pointed out at the beginning that the focus is on the NPC indigenous side, so it is estimated that it will cause People who like articles like the village chief of the novice village give up. Of course, this type of group drama is very difficult to write, plus Dou Er. To be honest, there is a god king pressing down on his head. Either he is a licker, or he is super strong from the beginning. It can only be said that it is difficult to write. Two very difficult plots are combined together. If you look at this book review area with only a dozen comments, it can explain the problem.