Stock up on Millions of Tons of Supplies to Help Your Parents Survive the Apocalypse

Today, at 16:40, the sky in Zhengzhou looks like the end of the world

The author, first of all, your writing is very good, but there are some parts that I think are not very good and can easily be misunderstood. Here are three opinions (just some opinions, if the author thinks it is not good, you don't need to adopt them) The first point: The heroine and her parents stocked up enough supplies for their lives, but they still bought so many supplies for zero yuan, emptied so many supermarkets, gas stations, etc. I think I can change a few cities to collect wool. Although it is said to be the end of the world in the novel, we are still in a peaceful world outside the novel. When we see this, we feel a little uncomfortable. I hope the heroine will stay a little bit longer. Especially when I read a chapter in the back where the army people said that the heroine emptied most of the city's supplies, causing many people to starve to death, I felt even more uncomfortable. It's not a bad idea to go to a few surrounding cities and shop for zero yuan. Second point: This is the point I want to say the most. When I saw the heroine pretending to faint and being escorted by a soldier, knocking him out and trying to kill him, I felt really sad. I have always wanted to organize my language well, for fear that you might think that I am morally kidnapping or something, but I still can't help but recall that our country can live so peacefully because there are such people who carry the burden for us. I have watched a lot of military-like documentaries, and I feel even more uncomfortable when I see the lovely people in them, risking their lives and blood in exchange for our peace. In addition, some of the disasters that have occurred in our country were caused by their human flesh. Third point: Later I saw a group of soldiers outside the heroine's villa who wanted to capture it. I felt that since they were sent by the base, they should not be labeled as soldiers. They could be a team organized by their base themselves, they could be mercenaries, they could be some security teams, or something. I think it is a bit insulting to be called a soldier. The army will not do this. They are a group of people who can stop bullets for us regardless of life and death. If you tell me that this is the end of the world and what has happened to people's hearts, then I really want to tell you, take a look at our Chinese history, especially modern history, is it the theory of good nature or evil nature? I think it's both. Human nature is complex. How can we generalize it? Because it is those kind people, those who don't care about life and death, who have the happy life we ​​have now. If you want to write that paragraph, you can write about the Al Qaeda team. They came to rob it. Then, our army happened to meet and cooperated with the heroine. Then we used this to communicate with the heroine to see if we could get some supplies to save people, and then what conditions were promised to the heroine? In this way, when writing in the future, you can also enrich the plot. Since the country has discovered that this is the end of the world, talents like this must be well protected and cooperated with them. After all, our country has never encountered any major disasters. It would not be so stupid to stand up from the sick bed and achieve the current achievements step by step. Finally, I hope the author will write better and better, come on😊

I've read it, the author should write it quickly, it's not enough 🐷

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