1983: I Really Don't Want to Be a Literary Giant

Poison It is true that the brain is sick. The gangster is teasing your girlfriend. You beat up the gangster, then gave them money, and then told them where your home was and what your name was.

It can be seen that the author is not very good at writing

If you don't rob Faye Wong in Baihua Hutong, you can play Zhang Qing 😆😆😆

Personally, I felt that there was a sense of distance when reading this book.

The author's character dialogue design is too raw, too fake, and has no natural life. Everything comes out of thin air. You need to know that every character has a background and standpoint, and dialogue based on the standpoint can be natural, especially for the elderly. The elderly generally have more experiences, far-reaching ideas, and are wary of society. They will not trust strangers with their lives and fortunes just because of a few words. Even if you want to preach, there are many neighbors around you for decades. Friends who know the basics are not more reliable than strangers?

The rhythm is wrong, and it is too different from Wen Hao Wen

You look stupid to me. You gave the gangster money and told you where your home is. The gangsters at that time were really gangsters. You are a single-mother family. If you don't consider yourself, you should also consider your mother. A woman and a helpless man. If gangsters harass your home every day, what can you do?

How is your writing? Are you worried about it? "Zhu Xian" has already been written, and it doesn't matter what era it was at that time! ! !

As title

See for yourself what you wrote, whether it makes sense or not.

Author, am I the only one reading this? 🤓🤓

May I ask who this Zhang Qing is? After searching, this is the only one