Naruto: It Must Have Been This Ninja Crow.

Why Naruto got a Chinese name? I can't figure it out without searching online

This introduction looks a bit familiar, like a happy worker (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

What's going on, can the cut-off book be used to introduce daily poison?

The problem is that the story itself needs to be interesting. The introduction feels good, so it's a bit bad to come in and read the text. Your selling point shouldn't be around Danzo, why should you focus on Uchiha Shisui and Uchiha Itachi. Then I got some abilities and gift packages, which probably eliminated some people. It is recommended to read the negative one without the golden finger. Danzo is okay, but it is a little watery at the end. But the story itself is good. The main character's Golden Finger Lottery is not exciting at all, and it has no sense of existence. Like a narrator

I'll give you a suggestion. Change your Chinese name. It'll be a bit awkward.

The introduction looks familiar. I remember that there was a Naruto novel that had an introduction format similar to this book.

The introduction has nothing to do with the content, right?

I saw the ninja chicken coming in immediately, but I didn't expect it to be the ninja crow.

Details determine success or failure. I couldn't even do such an important and simple task as naming the protagonist. Not many people watched it.

I can tell at a glance that you are a time traveler, a fellow countryman meets a fellow countryman, a five-finger fist heart sword. 😜 I suggest writing Japanese comics. For American comics, just do as the locals do. When writing about Naruto, just use the original surname. Your protagonist's name can be Hui.

The protagonist's name of the old hater should be changed as soon as possible before it is released on the shelves.

The evil green moon is in the sky, and the evil blue stars are rampant. The chaotic power of the subspace penetrated, wanting to tear apart the space and come again. The survivors of the medieval Warhammer Endgame and the Blue Star humans jointly deployed a new line of defense to resist the invasion. Yin Qingsong stood on the land of his hometown and looked around. "What are you doing?" Nurgle asked curiously. "I'm making soup." Yin Qingsong pointed at a big pot in front of him and smiled. "Can I try it? I am very confident in cooking soup and I am a well-known gourmet." "No, wait a little longer, I still need some heat." "What are you waiting for?" "Waiting for you to get into the pot!" Poof, with a hammer, the brown-green rotten meat fell into the pot, and Nurgle reunited with the brothers Khorne, Tzeentch, and Slaanesh. "You will regret it!" The four demons cursed in unison. "No, I am the master of my home!" Yin Qingsong pounded the pot a few times with a drum, urn, and golden hammer, then used the broad blade of the Five Tiger Broken Door Knife to act as a lid to cover the mouth of the pot, and said with a satisfied smile.

The subject matter chosen by the author is not attractive, and it would be outrageous if there were any results 🙂

First of all, I am very sorry to the readers who supported me, and thank you to all the readers who corrected my mistakes. The results of this book are very unsatisfactory. It is also my fault that I made a mistake at the beginning. When I captured Orochimaru in Chapter 20, I did not use the main point of view to narrate it. The most important thing is that the main perspective is not used. What I thought at first was to discover something strange from other people's perspectives. In the eyes of readers, it is obvious at a glance that these things do not belong to the original plot. They must be the protagonist doing things quietly. But the effect of my narration is quite poor. I can only enjoy it when it is revealed at the end, and the narration in the middle is very dull. The new book avoids these problems as much as possible, and also abandons this idea. I hope you can read a few chapters before deciding whether to read it or not. Sorry, everyone==... My idea for the new book is to seal the Six Paths Sasuke in the body as a jinchuriki. This is an ability of the system. I made a favorability system to allow Sasuke to interact with the protagonist. It was negative at the beginning. Sasuke did not know that the protagonist knew the plot behind it, so he led the protagonist to die. If the protagonist dies, Sasuke will be free. The system can earn points by causing emotional changes in others. Favorability is bound to points. When it is negative, the purchase of goods will have a debuff. If there is a positive buff, the protagonist will have the consciousness to improve the bond. Another point is to realize the dream. I chose the time in the middle and late stages of the three battles to give every regretful character a perfect ending as much as possible. For example, saving Kushina, saving Uchiha, and letting Nazu live a very, very happy life even though they are relatively weak. I also hope readers can give me feedback and tell me who I want to see saved The third point is Danzo. This book will be done under the banner of Danzo from beginning to end. Even if he dies, he will still be channeled. New book: "Six Paths and Jinchuuriki, Willing to Fight the World for Danzo" Introduction: There are two people in Konoha, both of them are extreme radicals. One is Danzo Shimura, who will do anything for the position of Hokage, including Konoha. A man named Akunari Yosuke, he will do anything for Danzo-sama, including Danzo-sama. ———— In the year when Shimura Danzo was forced to die by the five major powers, Akunari Yosuke slumped on a chair in the park, holding a popsicle in his hand, his head lowered, silent. Jiraiya walked up to him to comfort him, but saw the popsicle dripping under the light of the street lamp. It wasn't until Jiraiya looked carefully that he discovered it. That's not the water of a popsicle, that's the tears of Yosuke Akunari. ———— When Yosuke Akunari found Danzo's body, he hugged Danzo's body, shed two lines of blood tears and cried until he couldn't stop crying. He vowed that he would create a world with Danzo-sama. This is a story about following Danzo, serving Danzo, accidentally killing Danzo, resurrecting Danzo, and driving Danzo crazy.

Give some feedback brothers and sisters. I feel that this book was not very good before Chapter 20, but after Chapter 20, I started to feel it myself. Do you understand? Let me know.