Jin Yong's Martial Arts in the World Under One Person

I originally watched Jin Yong's martial arts, but it turned out that the main character was weak. Even though he was weak, he was kidnapped into a company as a thug. Anyone who has seen the virtues of the company will basically know the virtues of a person below him. He actually went to the company to join. Joining the Tianxiahui is better than joining the company 😅

One person is much higher than Jin Yong. The upper limit of Jin Yong is Ah Qing, the land god who broke through three thousand Vietnamese armor during the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period. To be honest, the old Heavenly Master's golden light spell infantry cannon may not be able to kill with two shots, but at least three shots are needed. Each sect has records of ancestors' ascension. If you change the world view of the fantasy continent with a lot of spiritual energy and activeness, there are dozens of holy places, hundreds of first-rate sects, thousands of second-rate and third-rate sects that can't ascend due to heretical practices, and more than a dozen of the Holy Land, Buddhism, and Taoism.

As a fan novel, the first nine chapters have a very good starting point (the identity of the protagonist and the routine of giving cheats in Kung Fu). The cheats can be given to the company. After all, the protagonist has to be with the company, but others should not be able to learn them or learn how strong they are. Otherwise, the combat power system will easily collapse, and the role of the protagonist will also easily collapse. The writing is acceptable as a fan novel. The plot should be exciting, but not gangster-like. The only problem is that the protagonist is now in the first year of junior high school, and there are still at least 6 years before the plot begins. There can be many original plots in this time period, but it will test the author's ability, how to reasonably intervene in the plot, and the arrangement of the protagonist's combat effectiveness. Once the fan fiction is separated from the plot, it will test the author's ability. After all, most readers want to see how the protagonist changes the plot happily. Without the plot, readers have to use their brains to think, and thinking will consume the pleasure. On the other hand, if it is separated from the plot, it will not work. It is better to read the original work without any changes in the plot, so the original plot can be written, but the key point is to grasp the scale of changing the plot after the plot begins.

People say that Zhang Sanfeng was practicing martial arts while others were cultivating immortality. Now you are practicing martial arts while others are cultivating immortality.

Take a look and join the company! ! This book has nothing to do with me! ! !

Originally the writing was pretty good, but it turned out that I wasn't strong enough to withstand pressure, and a little bit of black spots appeared, so I cut it.

It would be great if there was a Hong Kong comic version of Nine Suns Magic, it would be able to restart the universe directly

Being taken away by force? Does it mean that you have an official background and don't want to go to that private company, and then people from that company take you away by force? It's not like being knocked unconscious. The author is completely bullshit for the sake of plot!

What about Xu Si and Feng Baoer? They were inexplicably and self-righteously investigating the protagonist, and even came to test him, so he was simply beaten to death.

It feels so disgusting. Someone who doesn't abide by laws and regulations wants you, a junior high school student with a clean identity, to join the company. What if you are a time traveler and not? Being carried away like this and asking for your martial arts skills, is the protagonist completely defenseless? After watching the anime, you feel that Xu San and Xu Si will not harm you? If necessary, the two Xu brothers will sacrifice you to protect Feng Baobao. Who do you think you are? Moreover, having carried martial arts secrets with you for such a long time, is it because you think you live too long? Too poisonous

Chapter 4 is withdrawn. At the age of thirteen, he forcibly abducted the protagonist just because he had contact with Zhang Chulan and was a stranger with no backing, and then tricked him into joining the company. Is this really a state organization? Not a bandit den? Also, Xu San and Xu Si would have died long ago if it weren't for Feng Baobao~

I was so convinced that I came with hope and wanted to wait until 500,000 words to start reading, and now it seems that I have. . .

It's well written, I just cut it off

"The Wisdom Sutra on the Roots of All Dharmas" comes from the great Ming Dynasty Zunjiao, imitating the world's martial arts with divine will. Seeing its martial arts and its divine will, control it "Nine Yang Magic" comes from the drunken monk, and all the martial arts principles in the world are included in it. Seeing his martial arts understand its principles, learn from it, "The Great Shift of the Universe" comes from the magical skills of the Mingjiao, and is the general outline of the world's strength. , Seeing that his martial strength is bright, "Xiao Wuxiang Kung" comes from the Xiaoyao sect, and its internal strength can transport martial arts all over the world, "Immortal Seal" comes from Shi Zhixuan, using the enemy's power to return his own energy to counterattack the enemy, The five methods are combined into "Yours is My Divine Kung Fu" to use the enemy's strength to fight for a day without taking a breath.

Why does this infinitely poisonous theory of degeneration still have such a market? Ah Qing, she didn't defeat many people because Fan Li dispersed them, both inside and outside the palace. She was fighting a breakout battle, not a battle of annihilation [He whispered to the guards and immediately mobilized a thousand soldiers and a thousand swordsmen to guard the front and back of Guanwa Palace] Moreover, the book clearly stated that after A Qing left, There are still people rushing towards Fan Li. It can be seen that people in the distance are not affected, and even people further away may not know what is happening [The clear whistle goes away very quickly, gradually getting farther and lighter, and the lingering sound lingers for a long time. Dozens of guards rushed to the door. The captain of the guard bowed and said, "Doctor, are you okay?"] What about everyone except Ah Qing? The three Tianlong brothers can attack an army of ten thousand people head-on per person. Can you, Ah Qing, do it? If you can't do it then watch The Legend of the Condor Heroes. Guo Jingyou describes that he is unparalleled among millions of soldiers. Yang Guo even rushed into the military camp and almost killed the leader alone. He himself has the lion's roar skill as an AOE Here we talk about Zhang Wuji, the first protagonist recognized by Jin Yong himself. I find it difficult to think that Ah Qing's first argument is not based on the right basis, and the result is difficult to be positive.

After seeing the latest chapter, how should I put it, the biggest problem with this book is: the protagonist's cheat was given by someone else! It's a child, that's the next best thing. I can watch it, it's grass-level, but it's not very smooth...

In my opinion, this is already very good. For example, if they are both cars, internal force and Qi are like water mixed with gasoline. The car can run, but not far. Qi is gasoline and can run very far. The same is true.

What age are you still writing this kind of novel?

I think since it is Jin Yong Wu Xuehua, he can develop into Hong Kong comics. But I haven't seen too much, and I can't give much advice. The only thing I remember is that there is Jin Yong's martial arts in Longhumen

The special martial arts in Jin Yong's world, the Immortal Changchun Kung for immortality, the Shen Zhao Jing for resurrecting the dead, the Beiming Magic Kung Fu, which combines yin and yang, can forcibly transform other people's Qi without any side effects. Xu Zhu's back is so ridiculous that there is not a single acupuncture point that cannot absorb people's Qi. The author exchanges Qi for Qi. Like Xu Zhu, the Beiming Magic Kung is so successful that as long as the body touches the enemy, the enemy will be disabled.

The Jin Yong system is too weak, not just a little bit weaker but the entire system cannot compare with one person. If you want to compare with one person, unless you are doing a magic adaptation or a Hong Kong comic version. If you want to be the original Jin Yong, then quickly add MOD Fengyun series Pili and Jinguang.

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Why didn't the author use the exercises in (Jiang Ye), or use the ones in (Snow and Fierce Swordsmanship)? You can also try the ones in Fengyun this time, otherwise it's a waste of time, martial arts versus spells, playing with that...