
Douluo: the System Has Been Here for Thousands of Years, and I Tortured Tang San to Death
斗罗:系统早来万年,我虐爆唐三
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- Completed
- Length
- 737k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The most outrageous second creation
After reading a few chapters, I feel like it's not my cup of tea. Goodbye.
The sword martial spirit has a relatively high upper limit. You can try refining the weapon to enter the soul. However, one problem is that the level of Xuanyuan Sword is too high. Although the remaining part is relatively rubbish, if that part is not handled well, it may affect the development, so if you ask You must use a better sword, otherwise your rank may be lowered. If you don't practice the weapon and enter the soul, you still can't reasonably improve the quality of the sword's martial soul. You can't just rely on the fairy grass 😰😰 This will be slower in the early stage, and you may not be able to get it.
No one complains?
God-given soul ring, the second soul ring is used up, it only lasts for thousands of years, it is too wasteful, in extreme cases, the ninth soul ring can be absorbed as a hundred thousand year soul ring, I am speechless.
Even if it were ten thousand years in advance, the 80,000-year-old Blue Silver King would still be 70,000 years old, so he would be trampled to death?
What the author wrote is unreasonable
If you want to give away your divine throne, you need to work hard on your own, and if you don't give it to Bo Saixi casually, you haven't even gotten the Heart of Poseidon, and you haven't started the Nine Poseidon Exams. God actually started to pay attention. In order to give away the divine throne, he had to pay a lot of attention to Tang San. He had to fight for him at critical moments. Normal people would give the divine throne to Bo Saixi. Who would pay attention to Tang San who was time-consuming, laborious and thankless? If he had the time, he could just pull in some passers-by and use some resources. It's much less troublesome and labor-intensive than helping Tang San to fight against the author.
I suggest the author change it
The impoverished Tang Sanshen will not pay attention.
Don't waste too much of the God-given soul ring by the author
Wait until your relatives and friends are born in their 70s before giving, otherwise you will start wasting 5,600 years
Some novels are too open-ended
The system dumps resources like garbage and no one will read them soon, because everything is too easy for you. Some fan novels fall in love with the heroine and the heroine every day, and they have all kinds of super powers.
Later, Xiao Wu can be allowed to inherit the position of the God of Love. It is the one in the Qiankun Qing Valley in the Sun and Moon Empire. She is very suitable for Xiao Wu. Basically, anyone who can take off the lovesickness can inherit it. Although Xiao Wu is a soul beast, the protagonist will still be given face by other god kings when he becomes a god king.
When did the author establish a newspaper or something in Douluo to control public opinion and ask Qian Renxue to help?
Ning Fengzhi didn't like it a bit. He felt that this clown danced every day and was too utilitarian. It can be written that the Qibao Glazed Sect was destroyed, and that Ning Fengzhi needs to rely on the protagonist to survive like a drowned dog. Looking at his aristocratic face, the fourth Douluo is a hypocrite comparable to Tang San, Tang Hao, Yu, and Xiaogang.
Douluo God Realm like Shura God
The God King is about as strong as an excavator, and he probably has no space ability. He probably can't do anything to the protagonist even if he meets the Divine Power. The fantasy sewers are so useless, Xiao Wu died of illness, and Tang San could only watch.
The author can add some Marvel elements
Adamantium, or serum. A few auxiliary items will do. Too much of a hodgepodge would be a bit disgusting and ugly.
Well, how should I put it? I can only say that the ending was written too hastily, and many foreshadowings were not taken back. But it is true that the early stage of this novel was actually pretty good. Although it was not necessarily great, it was at a normal level. However, it started to fall apart in the middle and late stages. To put it bluntly, the story was not attractive. In fact, the soul beast and the soul master do not need to resolve the conflict at all. The root cause of the death of the soul beast in the original novel is not too much hunting, but a certain love brain and a ten-thousand-year plan. Therefore, the protagonist's goal seems meaningless, and naturally it is boring to watch. Moreover, establishing a sect is not fun at all. The real pleasure of establishing a sect is farming and development. However, this novel does not. However, it is understandable that the Douluo aspect is not easy to write.
There is a work about a girl fighting with a small anus and being dragged into a cave by a spirit beast. A man and a man are on top of each other. The whole harem is a bit scary.
Author
The opening means that the author's novel has multiple female protagonists. Can you answer it?
You have too few heroines and it's boring. Don't watch it 88
Has the author considered giving the protagonist a small world? !
Author
Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?
I've read almost 200 chapters, just Xiao Wu. Do you want a single heroine? Can you please reply?
Author, you are not writing a new book? , I think you can write a peerless novel, wouldn't you be tired of competing with two books? !
I don't think it's necessary to follow the original work, right? In fact, the protagonist can be born in the village where Xiao Wu goes, and then take Xiao Wu to join another academy, and then go to Shrek after graduation. Anyway, it is just an excess. With Xiao Wu helping to earn rewards, it is enough. Otherwise, Xiao Wu appears in front of Tang Hao without any cover-up, and has a bad relationship with Tang San. The protagonist and Xiao Wu also suppress Tang San in various ways. Do you really think Tang Hao is a kind person? This is written very unreasonably.
Was copied
Author, someone copied your book on Tomato Next Door
Have you considered adding the Immortal Sword, the Demonic Sword, the Demon-Suppressing Sword, the Seven Evil Swords of Long Yuan, etc.?