Planter of Samsara Paradise

Yes, this is the first time I write an article. This level is great. Let me stock up more.

Put it on the bookshelf for two months and read it while you are still alive.

Are you also one of the Lucky Billions? If you stop updating, I will put you in the group to urge you.

The book was put on the shelves too early, so fewer people read it. With more than 30 chapters, it's like a studio that just circles around and leaves.

What is your relationship like with your editor? As a reincarnation fanfic, you start putting it on the shelves when the first world is over and you are still summarizing the harvest. To be honest, it is difficult to attract reincarnation fans. Under normal circumstances, you have to write two worlds before putting it on the shelf. The trial world plus the first world and the summary of gains and abilities in the middle, you try the reasonable Obtain a career with a relatively high upper limit in the future, how to complete the task for the first time, summary of harvest, slow down the pace and experience the daily life of the protagonist. After entering the next world, you need to show how you can reasonably demonstrate the improvement of the protagonist. It is not just about relying on data. But if it is put on the shelf too early, the second half will not be available, resulting in your subscriptions must be very few.

I was very disappointed. The first world was obviously okay, and I gradually developed into a plant researcher. But when I got to the maze, I was exploring in a small group, and the direction became strange. I was a little disappointed.

The first world has been released before it even started. Are all the newcomers who write reincarnation fandom so confident now? Keep it for now, wait until a few months later if it doesn't die.

Outrageous 40 photos were released. All I can say is that reincarnation is a mess, so you should encourage it.

The author's data is so wrong. I was already proficient in archery at level 5 before. However, after upgrading, I started to level up from level 1. I got it wrong several times. Can I change it? It affects the perception too much.

Can Zuokan let the protagonist go to the world of the Little Flower Fairy?

I've read about seven or eight chapters, but I really can't stand it anymore. The writing is so weak, and the words and actions are noob. The author is probably a high school student. Maybe they are all junior high school kids. Also, the first volume ended so easily? ? Tie up the pollution monsters and shoot them to death one by one, and then give them an A rating... This is the easiest paradise fan I have ever seen to complete the level.

After reading this, let's not talk about anything else. Let's just ask a question. The problem with your skill damage calculation. How can you calculate the damage like this? Just take your selflessness and write it directly to increase the damage by 5%? Isn't this a joke? Shouldn't the specific damage calculation be linked to the skill composition? For example Basic damage 100, skill multiplier 50%, the final damage caused every second of charging increases by 5%, up to 20% (100*1.5)*1.2=180, So the final damage is 180 This does not include other variables, such as the damage increased by weapons and the damage increased by arrows. The damage increased by skills For example, there is no need to write down the enemy's defense. Just write the battle process in a wonderful way. There is no need to digitize the battle process.

It's only been a Trial World and it's already on the shelves? Other fan fictions have to add another world

Today's AI can write like this, which is fine, but you need to be more careful in proofreading

I just feel that the writing style seems very immature, expressing the inner emotions of the characters in an exaggerated way, and it's not good enough.

The author's skills are upgraded normally! There will be improvement! Not only the key point that has been upgraded to level five can be improved! I don't have that skill! Upgrade from level 1 to level 15! There are three options to choose and attack, and finally three passives are upgraded from 5% to 25% to five passives. Why do you think I only have enough money to upgrade from level 1 to level 4, but my skills have not changed at all! At least increase the base value a little, or reduce the cooling time!

If you have any equipment, skills, ideas, supporting characters, etc. You want to see, you can write them down in this building.

For the first two contract positions, why not just contract with the guardian banyan tree that has lived for thousands of years as your thigh?       ，， As for the issue of career inheritance after the elves, the 200,000 elves are extraordinary. This is definitely not the only thing that can pass down the career. Moreover, as long as the protagonist shows his ability and adds the contract, it will probably be passed on. The elves will only value the protagonist more.

I've just watched a little bit, but isn't the time spent in each world a little too long? Isn't the main thing about paradise being different worlds?