Huang Liang Zhiyi

It doesn't matter if you copy the seventy-two changes of Disha, but you have to have your own characteristics, system, background, and world view. You can cheat, but you must have your own things, religious rituals, folk customs... There are too many. Those who imitate me will live, and those who imitate me will die. If you copy blindly, you will be a eunuch.

I can see that the author has ideas, but the writing style is not very supportive.

It's already 200,000 words. After several rounds of the story, it's time to start. Dear book lovers, please use your little hands and click to the last page to add a follow-up. Thank you for reading.

The author writes some nonsense, but I still don't understand what the main plot is. . .

The story is good, but the writing is lacking, and the force feels high and low. Until now, there is no Tao, only techniques, which overdraft the body

It's okay. I just voted for you with my monthly vote. It's a good write-up and I'll still have it this month.

Jiang Ming

The road is long and long, I will search up and down, and encourage each other😁

This is too long-winded. You can tell a story about anything. No one can be seen in Chapter 45 of Pig's Feet.

Did a different person write the second time traveling through Lin Zhengying's world? I feel like the writing style has dropped a lot.