
Failed to Seize the Body and Became the Ancestor of the Devil.
夺舍失败,成为魔道老祖
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 126k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Original Fantasy
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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57Chapters
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Are all the comments fake? Chapter 2: Poisonous, I can't stand it. The protagonist has already accepted the fact that his body was taken away and failed. He wants to harvest the girl's cauldron, but he can't defeat the cauldron, but he can't accept that the cauldron wants to kill him? You can just say a few wise words to fool the furnace.
Please rewrite your beginning. This kind of beginning is not suitable for the starting point.
What you wrote at the beginning makes me feel that the male protagonist is disgusting. Reading the introduction is quite interesting. As soon as he walked in and saw that his body was taken away, the male protagonist knew that the seizure failed. When he met a woman, he got semen in his head and enjoyed it first. If you are an evil writer, I will admit it. This is also a bit interesting. The key is that the male protagonist can't beat him yet. He said that there is no grievance and no enmity. Isn't it my idea to co-author and enjoy it first? If you don't change the beginning, no matter how good your subsequent writing is, it will disgust people. How great a master do you think you are? Will anyone stick to it after three chapters?
Xiaodu
After reading two chapters, I have some questions. The saint's assassination seemed stupid. She knew it was the ancestor who had taken away the body, but she still assassinated her. What kind of strength did she have? She came to deliver food. If the plot is similar: a golden elixir realm saint uses a special skill to destroy herself in the realm and disguises herself as a sneak attack based on the fortune-telling results of a certain righteous boss in the world of cultivation. Then the protagonist suppresses it with the help of a demonic giant. This is normal and gives people the desire to read. I can only say that the author should come on
Wonderful!
The author is probably an old author. Although his literary talent is not particularly good, his storytelling is almost perfect.
It's not a novice novel, the plot has depth; Read two more chapters before deciding whether it's a novice novel or not;
This rococo assassination was written so brainlessly, including the protagonist.
White lady! I'm here! 🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵
Male protagonist Mu Chenyu
The heroine Rococo
It's very interesting. The plot is so interesting. Please update it more.
There are risks in seizing the inheritance. I hope everyone knows that you are giving yourself away and letting others use your inheritance to rise.
Awesome
I would like to recommend a piece of "Late Night Supper" in the hope that we can help each other, come on!
Just enjoy the heat. A very interesting book "The old man picked up rags in time and made a living by making bad movies"
It's been almost two hours, plus I'm just catching up on reading... Come on, it's from outside the country. You can't even try it, and the smart recommendation based on the number of words has been done.
A small suggestion, don't have too many words in a paragraph, it will be tiring to read 🙂