I'm in Hong Kong, and I'm Taking My Sister-In-Law Fishing at the Beginning

I saved it for half a month and you wrote 8 chapters. Are you ready to cut it off?

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If the protagonist's character doesn't change, he'll still be on the street. That's not to say that he can't curse, but the protagonist feels like he never speaks normally and only curses.

No one likes the character of the protagonist. If you want to watch an idiot open his mouth and curse people every day, there is nothing wrong with it. Sooner or later it will be over.

I like to read Hong Kong comprehensive articles these days, and then... Weiwei gives some suggestions to the author. Actually, I think the characters in this book are not very good, and the starting point is also bad. The original person who seduced the second sister-in-law was very... Stupid. Because from the back, the original body is just a bottom animal driven by the lower body. My sister-in-law couldn't sit still even if she got a little angry, and she didn't realize that the people around her were scheming. So the time traveler wipes the original person's butt too much, which is quite annoying. According to my understanding as an old bookworm, this is the author setting up the early conflicts and setting up difficult opponents for the protagonist, using this as motivation to push the protagonist to act and discover the plot. But... Actually this way of writing is not very popular now. We don't like to be like cows and horses. We take on too much debt at first and pay it back slowly. (Favor debt, emotional debt, hatred debt...) It is better to change the starting point to a duller one, let the original character be better, let the protagonist inherit some of the favor legacy, open up the train of thought of the time traveler, and go on the right path. What should I say about Hong Kong Comprehensive Studies? The bastard pool is shallow, and the young and Dangerous ones are all uneducated (except for a few dragon heads). Values ​​are out of touch with modern readers. You may prefer to collect goddesses from that era... Those who are coquettish, pretty, sexy, sweet... Are actually LSP attributes. Coupled with the development opportunities of that era, it was a rapid rise. What's so cool about this? Experts show the way, heroes save beauties, veterans of flowers, the golden age, flying pigs... It's not about robbing homes, showing off ruthlessness, and being arrogant... Who can be a dwarf mule if he can make money. The short mule is actually not stupid, but he has no chance, no channels, and no vision. Also, please forgive me for only reading the beginning and posting such a big complaint. I just want to make some comments, it doesn't matter whether the author considers them or not. I think, like Carmen in Mongkok, we can recruit a sensible and low-key subordinate like Ah Hua, and then turn around and do some intellectual work. If you are black and white, you can take all the tricks, and you can use the tactics of the superior, and your younger brother can assist you by playing some black tricks, so you can be powerful and domineering. Is it possible to conquer the world as a reckless emperor? How can an emperor be so arrogant (except for Liu Bang)... You don't need too many subordinates, the main thing is loyalty. There are many low-level people like Airplane and Ahua. The protagonist can teach them how to behave and lead a group of subordinates to make the best use of their resources. Such a character, if you play around with it a few times, it will be very interesting. A sultry woman may not be unfaithful, maybe she just isn't with the right person? A young man who fights and kills is not necessarily stupid, but there is no one to teach him? I think I really want to write it well, treat the protagonist as an ordinary person first, and then dig into the deeper stories of the people around him... Well, it should be good, right? I have no idea about issuing tickets to grab gold shops. This kind of blood reward for robbing families can never solve the normal operation of an organization. Too many questions. Morals, laws, human feelings, sophistication and universal ethics... Are all the best choices. After setting up the system space, what kind of business should we do? Go out and smuggle "high technology" and sell it back. It's your own "righteous" business. Instead of competing with officials for food, how good would it be to not bully the common people? Then complete the accumulation of funds and enter the business with the perspective of future generations. If you have money, accept Blue Lanterns and dig out the trustworthy little brother in film and television scripts. If you have enough money, find those two-hundred-and-fifty-year-old bosses to replace them with their younger brothers. It quickly took off.

These young and Dangerous novels start to differentiate themselves from the moment the protagonist starts working in the industry. The funniest thing I have ever seen is that the protagonist has just started his job and wants his young and Dangerous subordinates to work in his own serious company. If a young and Dangerous young man can be a serious screwdriver, can he still be called a young and Dangerous boy? Hahaha In this book, it is okay to let his subordinates work as real estate agents. After all, it is a gray industry.

There is already a beautiful ceiling-mounted sheng of the same type!

The protagonist seems to have rabies, or it's in an advanced stage. This is not how arrogance and domineering should be shown.

The writing is actually good. The arrogance is also in line. After all, there is a golden finger and you are still submissive. That's really not interesting. I like this kind of thing after all.

Is this sister-in-law also arranged? . .

Draw lessons from the shower and sheng, behavior, temper and attitude, kicking women, etc. Basically the same!

Nowadays, everything written about Hong Kong TV series is based on the same routine. The first one is undercover, the second one is having an affair with the sister-in-law.

"Black and White" Ya Qin (Li Caihua); "The Bird Saint" Phoenix Girl (Liang Zheng); "The Supreme Scoundrel" Sister-in-law (Francis Ng); "Stunning Weapon" Madam Rose (Ellen Chen); "Super Policewoman" Nie Ling (Yang Liqing).

Hong Kong Comprehensive Ceiling Show. . .

There has been no update for two days and no explanation?

I just like the character of Pig's Feet. I cringe when reading a novel. People in this place have psychological problems. They live so obscenely that I can't stand up.

The protagonist is acting in his true colors, right? He's still undercover? Those who are worse than gangsters should not insult the police.

How come this type of novel is all about dogs and undercover agents?

This thirteen-year-old seems to be a female author, and she also likes to fuck the sister-in-law the most, in both books.

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The protagonist killed so many people with his car and hit him so many times. I didn't see anyone from other clubs hitting him with a car. Could it be that the author set up the book so that only the protagonist can hit him with a car? There was also a time when dozens of people died and the police didn't even show up. The author is really stupid.