I'm Directing Myth Resurrection in Tokyo

The impression of your book is even worse than that of Planting the Sacred Tree Next Door. The main reason is that other characters appear less and Ryuji Kosaka appears too much. This makes the book a bit like a biography of Ryuji Kosaka. People who know the character of Ryuji Kosaka will smile knowingly, but people who don't know feel that this person steals too many scenes. No, even if they know, they feel that this person appears too often and it is annoying. In the future, we need to reduce the appearance of old characters and increase the description and interaction of new characters. The conflict between new characters and old characters cannot be like that in the book Planting the Sacred Tree Next Door. This is because the villains are all done by the protagonist. As a result, except for the villain and protagonist's clone, other characters are doing their own things. After defeating the protagonist, they go back to their homes and find their own mothers. There is almost no interaction and the plot is fragmented. This book feels more and more like the one next door. Except for the protagonist doing things, the other characters all play their own roles. The most unpleasant thing is that the perspective is always fixed on Kousaka Ryuuji. The book next door does not at least describe one character in a fixed way, and you are too fixed in describing Kousaka Ryuuji. As a result, this book is just a personal monster-fighting and upgrading article by Kousaka Ryuuji. How about you stop writing behind-the-scenes stories and start a new book dedicated to personal biographies. I think you have a future in this area.

The Japanese people are suffering, the Chinese netizens are happy

The following is a personal opinion. The extraordinary person appeared and killed someone. The official may have blocked it and claimed it was an accident. But the victims have families and interpersonal relationships. Even in small Japan, if multiple people die, and they are all official people, it will definitely cause the victim's family to search for the extraordinary, and then hate the extraordinary, causing conflicts, just like the mutants in Marvel. In addition, a large number of official people died in extraordinary events, and there will definitely be a shortage of manpower, because most of the official people are elites, and their training takes time, and they are not automatically refreshed NPCs. No matter how much the official blocks it, so many people died in extraordinary events, and other official people are not fools. They can't see any problems, and there are a few who are willing to work hard for the official. Power comes from violence. Extraordinary beings are themselves a challenge to the old power system. The official people must control the extraordinary at all costs, just like the industrial revolution. Whoever takes the lead will be the boss in the future. The destruction caused by extraordinary beings does not automatically refresh the city like in Ultraman. The economic losses caused by it have a lot of impact on the national economy, which in turn affects all aspects, leading to the decline of the national currency status. After all, there is no difference between a fight between high-level supernatural beings and an earthquake or volcanic eruption. The destructive influence caused by extraordinary beings should be reflected a little, so that the extraordinary power can be reflected. Otherwise, it will be like an NPC and there will be no real sense.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you watch the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you watch the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously forms, and the voices of praise become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the attitude of tolerance is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updating may not solve all difficulties, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates. So how long has it been and you are still trying to catch fish without updating? Are you worthy of everyone?

I hope that there will be no such thing as kneeling down when you see a girl and trying to trick someone. Newbies can be tolerant in trying to trick a girl. Kneeling before a girl is too disgusting, so don't write it. There are also newcomers who don't know how to write emotional scenes, so don't force it. Behind-the-scenes writing without a female lead is the most popular, because those who like to watch behind-the-scenes don't like low-key characters, endings, weaknesses, and burdens. Come on, author

The choice of a male gun for offline No. 1 Is quite good. I have seen a lot of behind-the-scenes leaks and I don't understand why they don't choose a male gun.

Author, just follow the original outline and write about India, the United States, Northern Europe, and Europe, and then vote to decide which part should be more inked. It's a bit boring to be in Japan and Tokyo all the time, because I just want to see the protagonist dominate the world behind the scenes.

It sucks

The writing is okay and the logic is okay, but the early part of the plot is a bit disgusting. The mother who accidentally fell into a cult killed two children with her own hands, and there are more scenes. The other child's revenge is not complete, and he wants to commit suicide from time to time. His character is a bit weak, which indirectly leads to the death of his sister, and the hypocrisy. The good Officer Shiratori, can't he see that there is a cult, which is also an indirect factor that led to the death of his sister. For Officer Shiratori, if he is not wanted, although there is a problem, he will not take care of it, and if he is wanted, there is definitely something wrong. Is it hypocrisy or loyalty? No matter what, it is quite disgusting.

The most disgusting thing about reading this kind of novels is that they are all low-level people and soldiers who die, and those with vested interests at the top gain the power to dominate the world. The world structure has not changed at all. Before the emergence of the extraordinary, these people dominated everything, and after the emergence of the extraordinary, these people are still superior.

If you want to make a big fuss, then pass it on to more miserable people so that they have the power to take revenge. Wouldn't it make a big fuss? So far, there have only been two or three rumors, and they obviously conflict with your main plot, so I'm just thinking about these two people.

Things have been going so well lately. After more than 130 chapters, the first two-faced Su Nuo has not yet been revived. It has been foreshadowing for too long. There is no interesting plot so I can only keep reading. I am afraid that I will cut it if I keep reading.

It feels like the male gun's mother is still alive and something is missing. Although she is still alive in reality, this harmful thing is still a little uncomfortable in the virtual work. She can be killed by the extraordinary invasion AOE.

After reading Chapter 101, I feel that the plot is a bit disconnected. I feel that there is no connection between the Japanese local gods and the protagonist's own original characters, the Akatsuki organization and the eight demons. It is like two stories. And to be honest, there are too few offline protagonists. There are mainly two people in the picture. Spiders have no effect at all now. The fish in the sea only appear once and then disappear. There are too few conflicts. To be honest, in this kind of behind-the-scenes story, the protagonist does not need to connect with other characters. He just comes out to start the plot. What follows should be real forces and various extraordinary reactions. The main purpose of the protagonist is to collect emotional points, and he is not his own offline nanny. There is no need to come out to protect people.

My personal suggestion is that the author can reduce the number of transitions in the article. It's too frequent and makes me tired. Just make two transitions in one chapter and that's enough.

Is the protagonist's sense of presence too low? He looks like a tool man, but Ryuuji Kosaka looks like the protagonist. Even if you write about the behind-the-scenes of group portraits, you can't always find one person to write dozens of photos. Your protagonist must have more adventures. The one next door, I am like a god, was written in the early stage of the group portraits. It was particularly good, but it collapsed in the middle and late stages. It was because there was too little writing about the protagonist group. In the middle and late stages, it was as if the protagonist group did not exist. I hope you, the author, can write more about the protagonists to enrich their characters, otherwise you will definitely collapse in the later stages.

The pig's trotters share the power and give a lot of ink to others. The result is that they are minions. The pig's trotters are always fighting each other. The impression is very bad. I will not watch it now after ordering it.

How many books of "Tokyo" have been aborted? Can you finish them?

Why has it become more and more popular since it was released? Are you laying the groundwork? I want to see a killing spree, with blood flowing like a river, and a little rhythm, but there is no rhythm at all? It's all just foreshadowing, I have no interest in pursuing it anymore, that's it.

Don't make a lot of two-dimensional things, or make them look like myths and monsters. And don't be too purposeful. You can create more purely supernatural events to enhance the atmosphere and randomly create a few extraordinary awakened people from around the world.

The author provides an idea. It doesn't matter whether you adopt it or not. Just take a look. Where did the Indian gods appear in the United States? Then the beauty was afraid that her living space would be taken back by the aborigines. Faced with an irresistible supernatural attack, the old beauty turned to the god of Xiaori. In order to give the god of Xiaori permission, she then allocated the land to Xiaori. In a rebellion against Tiangang, her son actually dared to claim his father's land.

The writing was okay, but there was a problem. The pace was too tight and there was a little lack of foreshadowing. As a result, the battle was not very exciting. It kept fighting, and then some characters suddenly appeared. There was no time to shape the characters' personalities. Although these characters were stitched in and they all had some understanding, they still needed some daily foreshadowing. There is no problem in dividing ability levels, the less the better. I hope the author will update more and don't become a half-hearted eunuch.

The author is an old two-dimensional person and a user of B station. The ingredients are complex, there are too many elements, and there are many clues. It's great!

It's getting more and more confusing later on. The Holy Lord was actually killed by one move, but that's okay. Bo Gang has already written several chapters, and Quetzalcoatl didn't give the United States a big one first. It's too bad. Also, the main character probably hasn't appeared in Chapter 100. I almost don't remember this character.

Next, you can change the map. You can create an Assassin's Creed in the Middle East. Don't forget the iconic Leap of Faith and Hidden Blade. Egypt can bring out the pyramids and pharaohs, and of course the mummies. Needless to say, Europe is famous for Christianity, including angels, knights, demons, wizards, vampires, and witchers. North and South American myths and legends and the like. There are a lot of things that can be written on a map, and you can write three to four million words at any time.

Is this enough to be cut? I originally wanted to keep it for a while, but the monthly ticket was given to me in vain.

The new map of the church is interesting. The layout has suddenly grown from where it was when it was small! To support the opening of a new map by the author, just follow your outline.

When will you enter the new dungeon? The voting has been completed. When will you enter? One chapter a day is too little to update.

It's time for the author to create a new map. After finishing the resurrection here in my little life, I have to write some new maps.

Come visit with "When Magical Girls Kneel at My Feet". The behind-the-scenes group portraits are written in a two-dimensional style, with a little bit of extravagance added. It was also written with inspiration from the author. Interested book friends can try this meal replacement book. Thanks again to the author for bringing us this excellent work.