Ultra: Evolve from the Ultimate Creature

1. Please don't take the setting for granted. Since the original work is about the Night Clan, and you know it, then don't use vampires to transform into ultimate creatures. You can't wait for a month to go on adventures. I wrote before that I was afraid of death. After extracting the blood of the Night Clan for research, I relied on vampires to devour the Night Clan. It's better than using a vampire to directly transform into an ultimate creature. 2. Can the place where silly girls can travel through time and space be changed? Don't take it for granted that Sha Niu can travel through time and space in Tiga. People have told you that Sha Niu relies on other things to travel through time and space. 3. Respect your own settings, and do not match the settings before and after. The more I write, the more I take it for granted, and I always wonder what to do.

Is it okay to rely on the Stone Ghost Face to turn into a vampire and then turn into an ultimate creature? Katz developed the Stone Ghost Face to release the potential of the Night Clan to overcome the weakness of the sun. The half-finished Stone Ghost Face can only allow them to face the sun and petrify to save their lives. You, an ordinary human, can use it Turning into a vampire with a Stone Ghost Mask is just a transformation from a grasshopper to a pet cat. They are all food for the Night Clan. They are not designed for human use. A vampire wearing a Red Stone Ghost Mask of Ai Zhe will probably be burned to ashes when exposed to ultraviolet rays. Without this diamond, how can he get the porcelain job?

The writing of this book is a bit messy. There is an inexplicable cheat. You are not allowed to write the system directly. And you, a new author, are a bit greedy and want to add everything to it. Can you grasp it? It is better to write a pure Ultraman. Wait until your writing ability improves and then write something like this.

When you wrote Chapter 11, when you described the protagonist's ability to activate, you said it would be better for Kaz to die honestly. You also said that the protagonist's ability will make items in the fantasy world disappear, otherwise why would Kaz die? Next, Chapter 14 also describes that the protagonist knows that the super body has medicine to develop the brain. As a result, I honestly had no intention of manifesting it at all. Author, you really need to be careful. What you write is a manifestation of fantasy, not theft!

Bohemian Rhapsody is more like a fantasy that materializes once a month, and it's not this Bohemian Rhapsody.

The main point should be to promote the change of the protagonist's thoughts in the plot, rather than to mix a little plot into a lot of thinking and chaotic settings. You just want to have both, and you don't have enough writing power to have an outline. If you take too big a step, it will be delayed. It is best to write a pure and refreshing article, which does not require too much writing power. After that, you can improve your writing power and then open new holes to add changes in thinking. You can Go look at the descriptions of emotions in more classic books. Don't use a lot of complicated settings to write about emotions. You can describe them bit by bit through side descriptions, such as a certain event or a change in a certain expression, or a supporting role in the text to set it off. Instead of writing an indifference here, an indifference here, an indifference here, something like before, something like that, and something like how it is now.

It's okay, but it's too wordy and not smooth.

A novice author, but not much talent for writing books. The writing is too watery, bland and boring.

You QQ life form feels inferior to the Little Golden Man, and you are a bit picky about your feet.

There is a limit to the number of times you can use Sha Niu to break the law. After reaching ten times, Sha Niu will be scrapped. I broke the law at least three times when I came to Jakuma. One was to apply for a fake identity, another was to change the memory on a large scale, and to change the records of TPC official equipment.

These are just a few pictures, but your plug-in settings have changed so quickly, it's so speechless.

Nowadays, many authors don't even describe the environment, characters, or psychology. It's so uncomfortable to watch.

The alien beasts in the world of Ultraman Nexus are creatures that feed on negative emotions and have evolved independently. Also, Yefu, Jetun, Absolut, etc. After swallowing these, you will become invincible.

Moreover, many of the plots are unreasonably designed and are too taken for granted. How about exhaling what I am thinking about (the problem of stone ghost faces, the problem of future mobile phones, the problem of doped bodies). Many settings are unclear.

One thing to say, if you make a small broken watch, whether it is X Superman or Clock King just to save your life, it will definitely be no problem. You can even make Bang's synthetic watch. X King Kong is not as good as the one you have now.

Your book is good, but it is very unfriendly to readers who have never read Kamen Rider. 🙄

Don't be happy with your grudges. Isn't that time traveling in vain?

I have only read more than ten chapters, and there are no poisonous points. It is the kind of watch that can be watched, at least it will not be poisonous, but the feeling will be very bland, But there are many flaws, For example, the most classic one has a pretty good plug-in, but for In order to prevent the protagonist's combat power from collapsing, he slashed hard. In order to suppress the battle, the props taken out always have to have certain restrictions. This prop is originally very strong, but I must add certain restrictions when using it. Even if the original version does not have it, there must be some restrictions. In addition to the restrictions that the effects may be different in different worlds, I am not saying that it is not good, but why did you open such a big hook in the first place? It is better to make the hook smaller, but without restrictions To be straightforward, there are very good settings , but lacks imagination. For the sake of story, the setting has been sacrificed, or a certain amount of weakening has been carried out. It is a golden finger that can be used as a cool novel. If the ability is cut, it may be damaged if you are not careful. For the sake of the logic of the story, the ability has been severely weakened. Furthermore, the setting is still a bit vague. The parts that should be explained are not explained. There are not so many setting things in the first place, but they have to be made more reasonable. In addition to the verbosity and the possible suppression of combat power, it is similar to the general time-travel genre, Zhutian, and the personality is also very popular, which belongs to the standard character template.

There is a rule at the starting point. In every new book, the main character has to give a lot of explanations about the abilities he gets at the beginning or the abilities that follow. He first talks about the abilities of other similar anime, and then explains a lot about his own abilities. It makes people dizzy.

I can see that you want to write a lot. But there are many reasons that are unnecessary to write down. Alas, forget it. This is how newbies come.

In fact, it's nothing, just...

I looked confused, there were so many and complicated elemental abilities.

It's so confusing, especially the first few chapters

If you don't read Jojo, you can't understand what's written at the beginning, and you'll be confused.

Author, can Zero arrange this form, Ultimate Infinite Glory Zero 😍.

You can travel through the world and catch the Five Emperors and seal them with Five Spirit Locks

I thought this ultimate creature was Absolute

Thanks

It is best to link the abilities. For example, you can use the Huntian Baojian to match the AT position of the small universe and the apostle The AT position is the wall of the heart. What about the distance between the stars in the universe? The absolute defense is so strong that it can explode. The small universe is supported by the Huntian Baojian to strengthen the body. The holy clothes protect the body, defend against the enemy's attacks, and also defend the own small universe to avoid being blown up by one's own small universe when using the ultimate move.

I didn't understand a word of what was written in the first chapter of Big Brother