Become a Cybergod from Edgewalker

It's really exciting! The author tried to increase the power, but it's not enough👍🏻

1. There is no harem, all suitable CPs in the original work will not be removed, the heroine is only a female V, please enter with caution. Some people who have sperm in their brains will quit on their own, thank you. 2. The protagonist does not take the route of prosthetics. In the original cyberpunk world view, there is a group of people in the Eastern Kingdom who are said to have mastered special powers. They rely on their physical bodies to fight with super strong power without prosthetics. So stop talking about the cyber world being bound to mechanical parts. The cyber world is a world where all kinds of elements flourish, not just machines. 3. The plot needs, the timeline and individual character settings will deviate slightly from the original work, but it is basically consistent with the original work. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

Another so-called body in cyberpunk. I think the system can let me use hacking skills. It won't be difficult to block enemy hackers from invading, right? I don't want to play cyberpunk with mechanical ascension.

The cyberpunk world engages in meaningless body flow, it's really too abstract

I don't have any problem with you not being able to insert a prosthetic body at the beginning. The problem is that there is no brain computer. The protagonist can scan, and the most outrageous thing is that he can also use hacking skills? I think most of the logic can be explained by the system, but this is too supernatural and goes against the world view. . . It's about whether you can stop writing yourself off. Let's talk about intrusion again. There is no network access warehouse, just play hacking. I'm sorry, I haven't seen any books on cyberspace that can achieve this without an operating system. Your hacking is too bad. What the author said is: without adding a prosthetic body, if it is added, it will be the next Adam's Hammer. The goal is lofty and ambitious to write about the core of cyberspace. The problem is that the fan you wrote doesn't understand the basic rules and pushes everything onto the system. It's too lazy. It gives me the impression that you don't understand how to use hacking skills at all, and you just slap your forehead and write it. You should consider this point. If you are not a fan, I won't say a word, but you can't be so lazy if you are a fan.

Lucy marked herself as the protagonist and ended up getting mixed up with David.

Cyberpunk does not use prosthetic skills. . . I can't stand this subject

Licking Mann's team + nanny, the protagonist is stronger than them all and has to test to join the team. Saving people depends on the protagonist making a comeback. So what's the point of this team?

Cyberpunk doesn't have prosthetics? Hanging sheep's head

The advantage of not having a prosthetic body is that the hacker is Xiao Biao San in front of the protagonist.

How does the protagonist use hacking skills without a prosthetic body... And he doesn't even think about adding intelligence at the beginning (．ŏ_ŏ)

The typos have not been corrected. There are correction suggestions from readers, but the typos are still hanging. Before it was put on the shelves, I will not talk about the chapters "Knowing that there are tigers in the mountains, but prefer to travel to the tiger mountains". Maybe the author still feels good about himself. The key is the numbers. It was clearly stated that there were 30 people in ambush, but the result was that I was so excited that I killed four or five people at every turn. I felt like I had finished killing everyone, but in the end, I was still killing. I looked back and counted, excluding vague words such as "a few" and "the rest". The numbers clearly added up to more than 30. It gives me the feeling that the author stopped reading it after writing it, and didn't care about the previous chapters at all. Finally, let's talk about my feelings. Apart from good news buddy Stan and the catchphrases of various characters, you can't feel the atmosphere of Cyberpunk Night City at all. My feeling when playing the game 2077 is that everyone in the game swears and swears a lot, including V. What the author wrote gave me the feeling that it is more civilized than today's society. I can't say that there is no sense of immersion, but it can only be said that it is very poor. I won't go into details about other minor flaws. If I don't change it, this book will only be for my own entertainment.

V didn't even show his face, why was he so impatient to hang on to the heroine? Besides, they were from different backgrounds and the time they met Jack was also different. If the company had been in the company, v would have been friends with Jack a long time ago.

Give the author two suggestions, adopt them if you think they are appropriate, and ignore them if they are not. The first one is Shuangwenguishuangwen, but pay attention to the world and rationality. After reading ten chapters, I felt that it was like a game world, not real at all. Human relationships and social relationships are too simple. The second is that the description of battle scenes needs to be refined. There are too many blanks. This should be a problem of writing style. Sometimes, you don't need to think too much about the details. You can describe the characteristics of a scene in just a few sentences. In addition, it still has the same problem. There are too many traces of the game. It is recommended to look at other 2077 fans to learn from it. Wish the novel great🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

It's okay if you don't install a prosthetic body. At least install an access warehouse. Otherwise, you can't even buy things and receive information, but leave everything to the system?

The writing is really not good, no foreshadowing, no suspense, straight to the point, just a novice

First of all, let's lay a foundation - the world view of Cyberpunk 2077 is based on the world view of the Cyberpunk 2020 board game, and the attribute values ​​​​in it also directly follow the rules of the Cyberpunk 2020 board game. Although the game experience is not complete, according to the manifestation in the derivative work Cyberpunk Edgewalker, the Cyberpunk 2020 board game rules are actually still applied. 1. First of all, let's correct a misunderstanding that many people have, which is also a misunderstanding caused by version 1.0 Of Cyberpunk 2077, that is, you need to have physical body value first, and then you can carry out prosthetic transformation. This point is wrong. According to the game settings, the physical value that a person has innately is basically formed. Even after a lot of exercise, it is difficult to make additional improvements unless you perform artistic body transformation. In other words, you only improve the physical value through prosthetic transformation, not the physical value obtained first before you can carry out prosthetic transformation. In the rules of the board game, it is clearly stated that the attribute that determines whether a person can install a mechanical prosthetic is your empathy value, which is your empathy value for the feelings of others. This empathy value has a very wide range of influence. Your communication skills, the options you can make when encountering a thing, and your body's ability to withstand cybernetic prosthetics are all determined by the empathy value. In other words, the more you can empathize with other people's feelings and the richer your feelings, the stronger your ability to withstand mechanical prosthetics and the more prosthetic modifications you can withstand. So the first bug protagonist appears here. According to the author's settings, he obviously has emotions. However, if the protagonist cannot install any mechanical prosthetics, it means that the protagonist's empathy value should be very low, or even zero. In other words, the protagonist never regards other people around him as adults, and treats the world as an NPC world. Everyone except himself is just a bunch of data. If he dies, he will die. 2. Is the protagonist's basic physical fitness a bit too high? According to what you said in the rule book, the physical fitness of an average person is only three points. The attributes of an ordinary person here do not refer to adults who work long hours, but to a person who works out every day. He has a corresponding fitness plan, but if he does not have particularly good talents, his body physical value is only three points. A value of five points is equivalent to the person becoming an expert in this aspect of work. And according to the world view of the game, even if you are extremely talented. Your maximum single attribute is only ten points. If you go above that, you must undergo mechanized transformation, which means you have to install a prosthetic body on your body. Considering that each attribute of the protagonist is five points, it is difficult to imagine what the protagonist actually is. 3. How can the protagonist's physical fitness be multiplied by five? Is the author really not afraid of numerical collapse? Still the same problem. The author regards the world view of Cyberpunk 2077 as the basis of an ordinary Japanese RPG game, thinking that improving one attribute will increase a fixed strength. In fact, every time you increase one attribute, your actual attributes will increase exponentially. The difference between 19 and 18 is probably greater than the difference between an Adam's Hammer and an ant. According to the algorithm of the upper limit attribute value of the game world view, even if the world of Cyberpunk 2077 does have a true god who can resurrect the dead, distort concepts, and travel through time. He only has 20 points in this world as a body that can be accepted by this world. (20 Points does not refer to the unknown existence, whose body only has 20 attributes, but this world only allows a maximum of 20 physical beings to exist here. Those with more than this attribute value will be driven out directly.) What is the concept of the protagonist's physical value? The newly awakened system is directly increased to 30 points. You have to know that the Incarnation of God in the next game, Baldur's Gate III, only has a value of 30 points. They have that value because there are gods in their world, and the upper limit of their world is 30 instead of 20. The protagonist instantly has a body value of 30 points, even if we don't consider why this value is accepted by the world, or it is equivalent to what the creator of this novel world says is right. But just looking at the protagonist's performance, he actually doesn't feel quite right. It is equivalent to an ordinary person suddenly gaining the strength and physical fitness of a golden superman, but still carrying his past living habits. What will happen? His breath will instantly blow away the relatives and friends around him, at least blowing people directly into minced meat, at worst blowing people directly into the most basic material particles. If he is surprised by this and screams, Fengze will shock all living people in his city to death, or at worst, his actions will directly clean up all living things except him on his planet.

It's getting more and more boring. The main character seems to have no idea what to do. After several chapters, it feels like it's not written at all.

When I saw Pete seeking death in Chapter 48, the protagonist knew that the other person was a psycho guy but didn't even draw his gun, and then reminded him that something was wrong. After that, he kept watching the show until the psycho guy didn't even pull out his gun, but the author kept emphasizing that he wanted to save so and so.

This article is actually quite well written, and the characters are all qualified. There are too many comments about shark arms, and inexplicable comments about "nanny pimping", which are all ignored by Ruo Zhi who can't eat the fine chaff. This is by far the most realistic fanfic I've ever read. There are many difficulties, but not forgetting the original intention is the most difficult. I hope the author can stick to the original intention and finish writing. Here are a few suggestions: First of all, the author can describe the appearance of V and Cente in more detail. After all, they are both V, so they must be top handsome guys and beauties. However, the description in the article is not enough, resulting in readers not being able to construct a specific image. There is actually no need to appear as a street kid, as this identity itself is quite perfunctory in the game. Secondly, the protagonist Goldfinger is a bit casual. Currently, he has unlimited CD-free and the highest level time delay. I hope to add some restrictions so that it will not be too brainless. Finally, I actually like to see the highlights of the supporting characters, which makes me feel that they are all lifelike and not just a foil to the protagonist. I don't like the kind where the protagonist has to do everything himself and is inexplicably pretentious, which will completely change the flavor of the novel. Come on, author, give you a monthly pass!

David is too naive. I guess if it wasn't for the plot, Lucy would not like David. In a place where murders and arson are everywhere after wandering for many years, Lucy would like a naive David after surviving? Nonsense. The worst part is that he is a modern mama's boy.

Many book lovers like to collect books first and then keep them. This is actually very harmful to new books, because the data of the latest chapters is the most important and directly affects the performance of new books. It also basically determines how far this book can go. Therefore, some books may be lost as long as they are maintained, because it is difficult for the author to persevere without results. I sincerely ask everyone not to keep reading, but to read more. Thank you!

Let's burn this city to ashes... Wait, what happened to my body? !

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Keep writing. I will always support authors like you who write to my taste

Tsk, tsk, tsk, I promised you that I would not be a prisoner. I was in vain for supporting you so much. I really misunderstood. Your level is just like this.

I was attracted to the female v and then didn't appear for ten thousand years 😭😭. Another feeling is that the author wants to write a group portrait, but the colors and abilities of other characters are not outstanding, which makes me feel nondescript. The protagonist has to take the lead in everything but the feedback to the protagonist is weak, so it is really a babysitter and it is really uncomfortable😣...

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The first impression was not good, but after I saw a few pictures, the style and other aspects were very good. Come on come on

Hum 💢! I'll decide for myself whether it's right or not.