American Thriller Stories: I Can Delete Entries

This is not a crazy sacrifice to gather the wool of the evil god

All American exorcists have a problematic stance. Do the American people need your rescue? You are restricting their freedom. What the male protagonist needs to do is to rescue those foreign objects in the United States whose freedom is restricted They are also part of the American family They should not be discriminated against. Treat them differently They have also been living on this land since ancient times Or they came with the Mayflower They should also have the right to live freely on this land Is it the big deal that the IRS will collect taxes?😁😁😁😁😁😐

Many people who have experienced Ward's exorcisms think they are liars. The more famous thing is that the couple once wanted to testify in court that the man who killed their mother and brother was possessed by the devil, but the court rejected their request as witnesses. Later, twelve or ten years later, the family always believed that Mr. And Mrs. Ward were liars, and it was also revealed that their mother had been adding hallucinogenic drugs to their meals. . . . . . . Therefore, it is very likely that their mother turned into a psychopath in their family, not a demon. . . . .

The pace is too fast. Actually, what I want to see is the interesting growth process of the protagonist growing up in little horror stories. But after the second ghost, it suddenly started to deal with Hells Angels and Moon Knight. The tone was too high, the combat power suddenly soared, and it no longer had the same feeling as when I first watched it. It's okay now. In order to adjust the combat effectiveness, the protagonist's strength has been reduced. Writing this kind of plot nowadays can actually easily cause a lot of readers to run away, which is a poisonous point for me anyway. Come on, author(ง •̀_•́)ง

What is this golden finger exorcism for? It's dangerous and has low returns. It's almost like being a doctor,

The more I wrote, the more outrageous it became. I felt that the author's sanity value was about to drop to a negative number, and the feeling of graminess was getting heavier and heavier. This kind of book on this subject was really too niche. I felt that the idea of ​​deleting the entry was good, but the writing method and the subject matter were not very comfortable. Forget it, I gave up. After reading too much, I felt that my sanity value was also declining, as if it was polluted.

But you're not even D-level, so what kind of heroine are you looking for? Will you be able to suffocate yourself to death when you get stronger? All I can say is that finding a female protagonist who is weak is just stupid.

The plot is too jumpy At first I thought it was a chase But it ended up in a horror movie I just got the music box It turned out to be hell again I just came out of hell and it turned out to be Constantine again Then it was an angel again Here comes the flesh and blood God again Where are you writing the outline

Well, I'm a time traveler who doesn't know the plot. I've only read more than thirty chapters, but the male protagonist doesn't know the plot of The Conjuring. He doesn't seem to know the plot of Constantine either. He behaves like a native.

If you like American dramas, don't watch it. The revision is the same as the defense.

Not to argue. It's so repressive. Logically speaking, wouldn't the protagonist be able to get the entry by breaking the small wooden sticks? (Although there is a probability, but at least you can get the entries) You haven't even bothered to get those entries, but you have to eat and have nothing to do to find followers of the devil and evil god, just because you are invincible? He specifically took the initiative to find these things. Just like the evil god, are these the ones who make a living? You don't develop it, you can get entries by breaking small sticks, you don't destroy some things like metal to get a metal body or something, to make yourself more awesome, but in the end you just take the initiative to find some evil god believers. Are you really not afraid that the evil god behind will just kill the protagonist with a thunder? ?

The writing and narration are too poor. Besides, shouldn't this be a fan of an American TV series?

How come I don't know I've traveled through time?

. . . Does the author have no outline? . . Too fragmented

It lacks a sense of horror. Very few people can write horror fanfics with a scary atmosphere. In the end, they all turn into monster hunting and upgrading. For horror fanfics that don't create a scary atmosphere, I might as well go watch a movie.

The further I go, the less I understand. As I get older, my understanding is getting worse.

At more than 60 chapters, the protagonist has almost gone crazy.

I couldn't stand watching the part with Zha Kang. The protagonist forced himself into the plot, which made me pick my feet in embarrassment and even made Satan give in. I laughed. 88.

Ah, so Daily Guide pushed me a book that had already been cut? 🤔🤔🤔

The good guy's daily drug guide and a starting point have never let me down in this regard

Let me briefly talk about my personal views, hoping to help the author. When writing about beauty, the author should think about the overall style of the book and then choose the movie based on the style. For example, when writing about mysterious folklore, you have to choose movies like the Conjuring series that don't feature high-end combatants. Even if there is a paradise in the original work, you should downplay it through the story for the sake of the overall style of the story, or directly give a reason for the high-end combat power to disappear directly.

After reading what I wrote before, it's okay, but it's a pity that I cut it.

In the front is the thriller story of rice fried rice, and in the back is the fantasy life of rice fried rice.

Daily Detox recommended it to me. I went into the directory and found that it was cut 🥵🥵🥵

Let's change it to an ancient setting 🤫 Why do we have to do this in modern cities?

There are too many verbal logic problems. The front and back are inconsistent, and the transition is inexplicable. The first three chapters gave me a headache.

Accepted. I was sprayed by you again

So the books are still maintained, and the eunuchs are scattered.

What have you done? I just ordered a few tickets and you already have a way to die.