Fallen Girl, My Entries Can Evolve Infinitely

There's a problem! You can report it if you have already obtained the red entry! Just hide your best entries. With so few red entries, do you have to hide them in the early stage? Once you report it, whoever dares to kill you will not have so much trouble. And you can also get more resources.

It is recommended to add the transformation into the introduction. It is difficult to find the audience for the transformation article. I wouldn't have known it was a transformation tattoo unless I saw it in YaYa. If you are not the audience for the transformation article, you will not continue reading if you click on it and see that it is transformation.

There is no physical description of the main character in the whole story. I only know that she is a petite girl. I have no idea what she looks like or her characteristics.

It's a mess, I only recommend reading it without thinking.

This paragraphing affects reading too much, so use paragraphs as commas.

Withdraw, withdraw, the plot is too bloody, it is just conflict for the sake of conflict, and the family colludes with foreign forces to acquire their own top potential stocks, and the country has not even given a shit.

Without brains: Just like that With brains: It's a mess, there are constant bugs in the plot, and it's uncomfortable to read the paragraphs as commas

Chapter 7 is just disgusting. The situation was already extremely dangerous. As a result, I chose another entry that attracted hatred. How about setting up another formidable enemy and then being besieged by people from both sides so that you want to die?

Do you have a soft spot for "that kid"?

Although it's more classic, it's okay. It's just that when writing, it should be divided into less paragraphs. Don't divide a few words into one paragraph in one sentence, which will greatly affect the perception.

When I saw the duel in Chapter 21, it was just for the sake of fighting and giving up. There was no bet or reputation, it was just a duel that others proposed.

The supporting characters are written to be cool and cool, and they are domineering and contemptuous of the protagonist. What the protagonist says is a joke is actually the author's self-pleasure, patronizing elegance, and there is no reciprocal revenge at all 😥

Don't always say "that kid, what's wrong?" It feels awkward. Just say the name directly. If your elders say this, do your peers say the same?

Become a eunuch so soon? 😡

How can I put it... If you don't use your brain, you will still feel a little bit happy. But if you use your brain, you will find that there are constant bugs and the plot is blunt. For example, the villain young master cooperated with foreign forces for a pet dog, and the ferocious beast used for training newcomers was killed by the heroine without supervision. The soldiers only felt familiar with the heroine and told the heroine the information about where the heroine was going, and did not stop her (it is very dangerous for the heroine to go to this place)... There are many problems...

Red entry - protagonist's halo (only) Effect: When "someone" has the intention to kill you, you will randomly obtain an item and 1% of the other party's attributes. This is limited to one person per day, and there is no limit on the number of people.

Is the author unable to distinguish between martial arts and martial arts? These are two things, not a concept.

There are too many line breaks. If you don't know, you might think you are writing a program.

It's too dry, I wish I could have more routine

No, this..., The segments are..., I won't comment on the plot, I can only say go for it.

Self-recommendation

If you've seen it, tell me what you think

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It's great. Please recommend similar books.