Run! This World Is Full of Monsters

After reading the introduction, are there no men in this world?

When to add dots to dark blue 😄

One sentence after another does seem refreshing, but there are too many descriptions of emotions/contrasts, and the substantive content is a bit empty. The world view and background have not been explained clearly before the plot begins. The development of the plot is indeed very fast-paced. I can feel that the author wants to highlight the excitement, but there is always a feeling of being pushed forward. It is a bit awkward to read, so I will withdraw it now. I hope the author will get better as he writes more.

It's a rare fairy grass. During the long vacation, I accidentally got a glimpse of this best product from Daodu. It's a pity that I came early and still have to take care of myself. The plot is good, the characters are fleshed out, and no poisonous points have been found yet. However, I have one suggestion. Since I have spent a lot of time writing about women, I either accept them all or don't write them at all. Otherwise it would be pointless to be a turtle boy.

The beginning is very strange, giving people the feeling of being a big fan, then it piques interest and ends hastily.(¯ㅂ¯Crimin)

The biggest problem is that my writing is not very good. It feels like I am reading an outline. As I write, I suddenly get emotional.

The introduction is awkward, and after reading it I didn't even think about reading the book. It would be better to change it

Alas, I didn't make it through after all. Incense

🤔Didn't you say that you would write an ending?

It looks good, very cool, I just hope I don't have eunuchs, come on, it will be popular 😆