I Am an Orphan in Naruto and I Draw My Parents Myself.

I suggest adding the blood of Hinata and Kaguya later to become Otsutsuki.

I have an idea. It is known that Uzumaki Himawari can use the nine-tailed chakra, which means that the tailed beast chakra can be inherited. It is better for the protagonist to directly draw nine Jinchuuriki parents for himself to gain the power of the nine tailed beasts, and then combine them into the Little Ten-Tails. It's just that doing this is a bit useless. You have to change parents frequently. It's better to open a family tree separately. The protagonist makes up some ancestors for himself. If he wants to obtain any abilities, he can fill them in the family tree. In this way, the protagonist can slowly complete the abilities of the Otsutsuki clan through the genealogy, and even return to his ancestors.       ，， This is more attractive. I also hope that this book can be written as an infinite flow. It should not be like the previous novel, which was all laid out and thought it would be about the world of pirates, but ended up finishing the world of Naruto.

I remember there was an Uchiha book. I used super beast pseudo-paintings to tattoo the beasts on my body. The predecessor was nine dragons🐉, a lion fights, an elephant walks on the lower body, and the eagle on the back can summon an eagle, or just wings, etc. This idea is good, there are pictures of 99 animals on the body, instant skills

I have a technique to transform Neji, Shisui, and Itachi into Musume.

Water is all about explanations of the big picture, and you can only find a small amount of plot in a lot of explanations.

It's too dull. I've taken more than a dozen pictures, but I haven't seen anything that stands out in the plot.

The writing is really not as good as that of your friend. At least he is decisive in killing and does not write a lot of self-impressed words, nor so many unnecessary psychological descriptions.

It's too verbose. One thing has to be explained over and over again. Some cold knowledge is fine, but it's very annoying to explain things that everyone knows in this way.

The plug-ins are interesting, but the content is too boring. Simply put, water.

Awesome, the pendant made by a 4-year-old child allowed Anko to beat Orochimaru away.

To be honest, it's too bland, it's really just daily life. The protagonist is only five years old now. Before graduating from ninja school, he basically just had this kind of petty fight. It's okay to read a few chapters occasionally, but according to the way the author writes it, even a million-word protagonist can't graduate. The author had better finish writing Ninja School before putting it on the shelves, otherwise I really won't be able to follow it. It always gives me the feeling of a campus romance novel. The key is that it is a fujoshi 😅

By the way, is it possible to cause high-level officials in Konoha to get cerebral thrombosis through painting, and a lot of them die peacefully?

To be honest, the subject matter is very good, but if you read too much about the inner world, you will feel watery.

It's all a mental description, an explanation of the overall situation. It was so tiring to watch that the main character didn't even enter school until Chapter 52. He was really good at it.

The real Hokage ceiling

It's an exaggeration. The explosive power of something developed by a four-year-old child is already so awesome. I'm curious how you plan to write about it later? Because in the village, they are afraid of this discovery and fear of others studying you. You have already developed such power, but you are afraid of chicken feathers. It is not comfortable at all to contradict yourself.

This is too watery. Two-thirds of the chapter is a description of psychological activities, and there is no serious matter at all.

Here's a suggestion: before your writing skills are perfected, avoid using long sentences, as they will be difficult to read.

I just feel insensitive to my age. How do you think that you would go deep into the roots and then be abandoned at the age of three or four? Who are you targeting?

Isn't it okay to draw Frieza, Vegeta, and Gokong for the ancestors? If it doesn't work, you can also draw Napa as your father.

It's over 400,000 yuan, and I don't even want to read the remaining six chapters 🙂

It's too literary. I can't understand the plot.

Instead of explaining the mess, it's better to write the plot well. The protagonist's current performance is worrying.

Although I said I would finish it, emmmmm

Accept Sakura? My favorite female characters in Naruto are Sakura and Tsunade. I hope they will accept them, right?

It's a pretty good Naruto fanfic, but unfortunately I don't like harem stories!

The author's writing is very good, and it is definitely worth reading and subscribing. Recommend a book: Mental Patients Have More Happiness "Old Man in Time Travels to Scavenge and Survive by Making Bad Movies"

It's such a big mistake, and it also introduces things that are inconsistent with this world view. If you don't break it, you will break it. Learn a lesson.

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁

Two years after Uchiha Shisui's death, the Uchiha clan was exterminated