After Starting School, I Want to Become a Philosopher King

The writing in this book is better than the previous one. When writing about fan fiction, write about fan fiction, and when writing about originality, write originality. The previous volume was mixed together in a nondescript manner, and the CP of the original work was not removed, which makes it even more boring. .

Learning from the shortcomings of the protagonist's ability being too strong, this time the ability is easy to use but has restrictions.

There are too many things going on in the middle of development. It is normal to find problems when you take on a mission. Until you reach Chapter 40-50, you have been circling around this slum. The development aspect is written in a hurry, and it is basically related to women every time. The introduction of events is too rigid, and it always revolves around the slums, from the private gathering after the exam, to accepting the task at the university, and then specifically looking for ghosts to kill, which is a deliberate and deliberately inserted line with my sister. People can see the routine at a glance and know the follow-up development, but the writing style is relatively stiff. Even if the writing is mostly about replacing old wine with new bottles, it is difficult to attract old bookworms, while new bookworms will easily give up because there is no straightforward system that is refreshing. The summary is a story about an awkward protagonist meeting an awkward author and compromising under realistic conditions.

Tmd Dog breed, where is your amazing wisdom? I have been waiting for your amazing wisdom for more than thirty chapters. What are you doing?

I read the comments and said it was well written. I read Chapter 13. The old hero saves the guy, but actually saves the girl. Not surprisingly, he blocks the protagonist's gun and concentrates the fire. He is a stable boss (a person who is easy to use tools). Then he puts together a childish (referring solely to the author's writing style) theory of good and evil (do you understand it? If you don't understand it, don't correct it). It has no characteristics. (I quit reading it before and saw a few chapters. I clicked in and found 26 comments. My family was deceived.) I originally thought it would be a slow-burning movie, but it will get better later. But the previous part is so boring that I can hardly follow up. I have typed so many words anyway, so I will wait and see if the author will delete the comment. --2024.8.12 22:37

In fact, after reading this book, I have always had a few small problems. The most important one is that when I first started reading it, the protagonist's sister used the secret technique of the evil star to protect herself as soon as possible. But not long after, you said that the black shadow company under her sister had integrated into people's minds. Life, it can be seen from this that this company has to be at least several years old. However, why did his sister not use this secret technique earlier and had to wait until the protagonist came over to use it? This is too coincidental, and it has been several years. With the strength of the protagonist's sister, she must have a certain ability to protect herself. I accidentally forgot the following question, please remember it and talk about it later.

To be honest, this book is really not a comprehensive comic in my eyes, or it is too niche (I can only say that it is related to magic power, Gojo Satoru). The label is really not related to secrets and personal skills. There used to be books about secrets, but they were quite imperfect, but there seemed to be some similar games or something, but they were always imperfect. After all, secrets are really close to personal magic (Magic Forbidden System) and conceptual magic (shaped moon system), but they are not completely the same. Even if you are already innovating, the labels are really not good, and they are not innovative enough, or the whole book has too little system-related content. Currently, only martial arts is a bit complete. But for the sake of readability, you need to refer to the mystery. In short, some characters must have their own path system, and yours is more complicated. There must be very few who follow the path of the predecessors (after all, the background you set is there, or there are fewer who follow the path of the predecessors, but they are more powerful. It depends on you. I can't remember which period this was set in. After all, the background didn't impress me deeply, and you only scratched the surface. ) The background setting has been partially improved, but it's not enough, far from it. This needs to be expressed from the perspective of the characters.

I just published a new book and found out that the previous one had been finished. I hope the author will gain more experience and not make the same mistakes as the previous book.

Appreciate me as the leader of the Wind Tribe I will fight to the death for me, the Lord of Wuliang Island I am the Sea Tiger Martial God I am the Emperor of the Earth I... I… I--I-- My Emperor, the God of War, Kou Ya--

Is this the end of the book? Too hasty?