This Is My Ming Dynasty

There is so much nonsense in the writing, and the characterization is like a retard

No, buddy, what are you writing? I've been stuck on the first chapter for a long time. What's Lao Zhu Lao Si, something like that? Can you make it simple and clear? Stop using metaphors. What's your nickname? Can you write novels?

If it's a video or audio, I feel good about it, and the manuscript is fine, and I support it. But when it comes to novels, I can only say: Come on! Good luck.

I'm not used to the pronunciation of the words, but benevolence is in the eye of the beholder, and wisdom is in the eye of the wise. Come on, author🙏

I feel like you are talking about cross talk🙂

Can you write well? This style of writing is unbearable

This first chapter seems to have a lot of problems. Although the overall story is explained, it is obviously too long. Moreover, a negative attitude can be clearly seen after reading the whole article, and it ends with a dumbfounded attitude of the protagonist. Normally speaking, the first three chapters are the essence of a book, which can directly demonstrate the author's level. However, after a cursory glance, I can only see continuous negativity, and some explanations that the author finds interesting. In actual reading, it feels like a bitter love drama, tsk.

A PhD student in the history department accidentally traveled through time and became Zhu Yunxi, the unlucky grandson of Zhu Yuanzhang. He is a novice in the workplace, but he has to face the turbulent Hongwu's last years, a suspicious boss (Zhu Yuanzhang), hostile senior officials (civilian group), competitive colleagues (Zhu Yunwen) and subordinates who rely on him. Let's see how he breaks through the situation step by step, finally breaks out of the encirclement and reaches the top.

It's painful to watch, the narrative method shouldn't be such a personal feeling

I know, the protagonist's golden finger is that he can talk cross talk with the author that other people can't see! This will change the manga's author's role as the second male lead. And I always have a hunch that there will be a scene where the positions of the characters are exchanged.

From what he wrote, I can't tell that he is a doctor, and he should behave like a woman he has never seen before...

I think we should make up a fictional world and write it like this, it will mislead many people's history.

Brother, can you show me a few chapters of the Three Kingdoms that I posted before? It's my first time writing and I don't know what's wrong with it, can you?

Is this book published internally or directly? This is the first time I have seen an article of this style. Other articles are all serious narrative stories, but you narrate it in a humorous cross talk style. If the 6,000-word manuscript is submitted internally, I can only say that the author has something good 😁

Come on, work hard. Come on everyone! !

I have been writing about Zhu Yunxi recently🤫

Is the character derived from events, or is the event derived from characters? Will the protagonist grow? Not being able to feel the sense of fragmentation after passing through, it is easy for the protagonist to become a tool man - carrying the modern ideological system. In Zhu Yuanzhang's era, the changes in various systems were staged. He basically played the role of a political officer. He was the most established emperor in the history of military and political supervision and the establishment of etiquette. Personally as the grandson of Zhu Yuanzhang, I did not see the invisible opposition between the two. In my opinion, this is the most important point. Various other modern departments and other miscellaneous establishments are completely like castles in the air, relying entirely on the reader's experience, which really did not mean much in the environment at that time. The root lies in the system, and the rest are technical. If the true character of the protagonist is not revealed, it is like being lustful without ambition, which is empty in people and practical in literature.

Authors can write according to their own ideas, come on! Vote for recommendation🙂

Didn't you say it's on the shelves? Why hasn't it been on the shelves yet?

Finally I appeared again 😁 thumbs up👍👍👍👍

I finally finished my journey. I wrote so much in written form that I couldn't control the online writing field. I also wanted to test the waters, but ended up with a broken head and bleeding. Knowing more about history is not an advantage when it comes to writing articles. Sometimes it limits people to a framework, causing the article to lose its spirit. Last time I published 20,000 words and felt like a failure. You are still amazing and can persist in writing so much.