This Is My Great Ming

There is so much nonsense in the writing, and the characterization is like a retard

No, buddy, what are you writing? I've been stuck on the first chapter for a long time. What's Lao Zhu Lao Si, something like that? Can you make it simple and clear? Stop using metaphors. What's your nickname? Can you write novels?

If it's a video or audio, I feel good about it, and the manuscript is fine, and I support it. But when it comes to novels, I can only say: Come on! Good luck.

I'm not used to the pronunciation of the words, but benevolence is in the eye of the beholder, and wisdom is in the eye of the wise. Come on, author🙏

This first chapter seems to have a lot of problems. Although the overall story is explained, it is obviously too long. Moreover, a negative attitude can be clearly seen after reading the whole article, and it ends with a dumbfounded attitude of the protagonist. Normally speaking, the first three chapters are the essence of a book, which can directly demonstrate the author's level. However, after a cursory glance, I can only see continuous negativity, and some explanations that the author finds interesting. In actual reading, it feels like a bitter love drama, tsk.

A PhD student in the history department accidentally traveled through time and became Zhu Yunxi, the unlucky grandson of Zhu Yuanzhang. He is a novice in the workplace, but he has to face the turbulent Hongwu's last years, a suspicious boss (Zhu Yuanzhang), hostile senior officials (civilian group), competitive colleagues (Zhu Yunwen) and subordinates who rely on him. Let's see how he breaks through the situation step by step, finally breaks out of the encirclement and reaches the top.

Can you write well? This style of writing is unbearable

I feel like you are talking about cross talk🙂

From what he wrote, I can't tell that he is a doctor, and he should behave like a woman he has never seen before...

I have been writing about Zhu Yunxi recently🤫