Immortality Begins with the Hall of Valor System

Very top-notch writing style, a breath of fresh air 🤭

New author and new book, I hope all readers will support me! If you have any questions, you can ask them at any time. I will definitely read them patiently. Thanks!

A good book delayed by its title. If this quality could be maintained...

After reading thirty chapters, I think it's average! ! ! ! It's better to just write about possessed martial arts characters. It's not about fighting for world domination, and it's weird to write a story about possessing a military commander and using a single-player upgrade routine. If you wrote about a martial arts character possessing an upgrade to fight monsters ten years ago, more people would probably watch it than your current routine. There is no need to say what will happen later. At the beginning, there is a contradiction between the plot and the setting. The generals are equipped with a single-player upgrade stream, so it is impossible to attract more people. The readers on both sides are not on the same channel. Both types of readers are very insistent on their opinions. On the contrary, it has attracted some novice readers. If some of them have read one or two Invincible Summoning articles, they will even scold you for writing an upgrade stream here. You're not going to please anyone like this. Only a small number of novice book friends will read it. Nowadays, the mainstream is dominated by weird literature and Western Cthulhu style. But readers of martial arts and military commander novels still hope for better novels. But your settings don't please both sides. You can change the martial arts characters based on the routines of the Zhaotian Gang, and you can also resurrect them, and follow the Chinese martial arts and characters in other worlds. The generals followed the routine of dynasty emperors. Let's first capture a group of basic readers. Don't look at the low data, but there are actually a lot of people who like it. It's just that no one reads the summons text that keeps pulling down and pushing up. The characters are divided into three, six or nine levels, and they must be summoned from mortals to gods and demons. To put it bluntly, there is a problem with this setting. If you take people from the fantasy world and put them in the martial arts world, they only have internal energy. How can they be awesome? If you take people from the martial arts world and put them in the fantasy world of spiritual energy with better energy, who wouldn't be the best in the world? ? ? ? To put it bluntly, your writing style is good but the plot is a bit uncomfortable to watch. I am a reader who likes this kind of golden finger or systematic writing, and I have been reading this type of novel for eight years. A little perspective. It depends on you as a living person that you can write down some of your own thoughts and opinions. I hope it will be useful to you. You can also pretend that I didn't say it.

The quality of this book is indeed good. Does it have a female protagonist?

The quality is good, it would be better to update it soon.

Will the future be filled with Eastern heroic spirits? Will there be Western heroic spirits?

The heroine Seventeen appears, and the story becomes more and more interesting 🤭🤭🤭

A good book, 2 books a day is not enough, Li Jing'an...😎

I can't sleep at night, please update quickly!

The writing style is quite good, so now that I see the plot behind you is much clearer than the previous one, but I feel that the pace of your plot development is a bit slower. The current writing I have read is relatively fast, and your pace may not be popular. Keep up the good work.

Good guy, this speed is comparable to that of a donkey in the production team.

Very interesting, I watched the ending in one go.

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