Simultaneous Travel: Starting from Building a Shared Cloud to Become Invincible

In the early stage of the plot, I felt that there were a lot of things that were not written yet, so I jumped to the next scene. The fanfic is not going to delve into the original setting for the time being. It is enough for everyone to see the Emiya family's large-scale family recognition scene in the Holy Grail Arc. The subsequent plot is warm and sweet, and they talk about affectionate dialects. The key point is: in the last chapter (the BE chapter), the plot takes a turn for the worse and the protagonist is left to die! ! ! It took me two days to read it, and I was really disgusted by the book-cutting scene at the end. Although this is not my first subscription, I only spent the past two days to follow the last chapter, and I feel like my money was wasted.

This kind of traveling through many worlds at the same time At first glance, it is quite imaginative But after reading several books in a row, it is boring. A common problem is that there is no priority. Although the people in each world are the same, they are still different in the reader's perception. The first world can easily be regarded as the main world, and then he will write about another world in the blink of an eye. That would be boring, because this is equivalent to changing the protagonist. It's not because you said it hasn't been changed The last time I read a novel of the same type, the first world was Naruto, and the writing was pretty good, but as soon as it was changed, it was changed to Harry Potter, and then I stopped reading and couldn't stand it anymore Recently, I have no desire to open novels of this type.

For the sake of platycodon, I'll add a bookshelf to keep it up first.

Foreigners are also writing novels at Qidian?

The destructive power of Dragon Balls. The Kame Sennin with more than 100 combat power destroyed the moon. A combat power of 10,000 can blow up the earth. Frieza, who has a combat power of 530,000, exploded with stars. Super Saiyan One and Frieza, who have 100 million combat power, can destroy stars. Super Saiyan II can destroy the solar system. Super Saiyan III can destroy the Southern Galaxy. And 1/4 of the universe. Super Saiyan God Red. The aftermath of his three punches with Beerus almost destroyed the universe. After that comes Super Saiyan God Blue. After this is the single universe level to super single body, Super Saiyan God Deep Blue. Extremely comfortable. The King of Supercells, the Great Priest in Dragon Ball Heroes. The King of Omni is super multi-dimensional, Gogeta and Vegetto are multi-level. The wings are powerful and multi-dimensional, the cosmic tree is special and super multi-dimensional, and the cosmic tree is super blue and super multi-level. In the Z period, Frieza has the setting to explode the universe, Cell has the setting to destroy the entire universe, and Buu has the setting to destroy the universe by collapsing the dimensional wall. There are 12~18 universes in one space-time

It's too small to hang up, and it doesn't feel good at all. If you turn it on, you won't be able to see how strong it will be in the future. Isn't it a waste of time?

Now it's a big plus to write that HP is stuck to Hermione It's been an endless show for several chapters.

Maybe it's because Harry Potter fans write too much about Hermione, which makes me sick when I read it. I no longer have any interest in subscribing based on the title. It's not like there aren't any good Harry Potter books, so what?

It feels like the characters have been changed, the plot jumps around randomly, and there is no causal logic at all.

Why bother with Hermione? This is a drag bottle.

What Zhanchi wrote is off topic. You can use Teigu to carry your Shinigami system, but why can't it be carried directly by humans? Forget about carrying it. The entanglement with Esdeath was written unclearly, and it was covered in one chapter...

If you want to write a novel, I suggest you watch the anime again. Many places are a little off, and some are wrong.

I wanted to jump to see if there was any fresh content, but after jumping a few times, all that was left was the content after it was released.

The first one has a bunch of typos and still hasn't been corrected, the second one is a bit confusing.

It's quite rubbish. It's 99% of the time. It's so chopping. It suppresses the combat power. It doesn't share anything. It's superfluous to build a so-called shared cloud. It's been withdrawn. Shen Nong will leave a post.