Immortality Starts from Enlightening All Things

After more than a dozen chapters, I started to feel that the protagonist's character was a little bit different. Can't I write a good book if the current protagonist is not so cool?

How great would it be for someone so big to be the mastermind behind the scenes?

If the sword is gone or taken away, will its characteristics still exist? What are the characteristics of attunement? Is it dependent on the enlightenment target, or is it on itself?

The plot is not arranged well. It involves the battle between good and evil at the beginning. The protagonist is also on the assassination list. It is meaningless to give away people one by one. It is also meaningless to skip levels (the aura is too high). There are so many things that have been enlightened during the Qi training period. In the future, there will be crazy suppression. If you don't suppress it, If the protagonist enlightens so many things, his strength will inevitably increase rapidly, and the plot will not be grasped. Therefore, it is better to take it slow at the beginning. If you don't use luck, any energy is better than luck. You can use Goudaoduoshui for daily life, instead of being forced by luck to show off. When it comes to foundation building, the protagonist will definitely enlighten less and less. This is crazy suppression.

Chapter 6: After learning swordsmanship, you learned it directly and then went to ask others, do you have any serious illness? There is also compensation given directly to the parents. The problem is that this is different from other families. You don't have any classmates. Your classmates are all orphans. Your parents' friends and colleagues are all DINKs? How could you not chat with others? It would be funny to talk about the differences in your own home. This is not the time to give things to your parents.

The things that are enlightened are all foreign objects and cannot be used as long as they are not in your hands. It would be better to practice the flying sword directly.

You can write so many chapters in a few dozen days, and you will finish the chapters before they reach the Foundation Establishment Realm? ,, The studio AI is here to make money?

Will updates be discontinued as soon as they are released? 😅

This golden finger can make countless tricks, right? Who is playing with you?

The writing is quite nice, but the hook is too awesome, and you can do countless more awesome tricks. Besides, the pig's feet are so awesome that they should be stable and just hold on.

This setting is not bad, why not write a plot for mortals to practice?

At the beginning, it was said that there were only twenty days left before the special move! There are still more than ten days until Chapter 65, and it has been upgraded several times! Except for the above flaws, the overall performance is good. The fourth natural disaster is a bit of a drama!

It's okay, but I don't think it's appropriate to call it enlightenment? Generally, enlightenment is the kind of enlightenment that enlightens children, that is, turning something like a stone into a boy to help with work. It should turn something originally inanimate into something alive. Pig's feet should be the ability to add points to items, adding points to change originally ordinary things. 🐮, I think it should be more suitable for bonus points Others are not much, except that the first enemy with that devil in the bookstore was a bit too abrupt. He finally sneaked in and ended up threatening a random customer who was talking to the woman in order to attract people? It's quite confusing. Even if the pig's feet seem to have some relationship with the woman, it won't be like this. Isn't this a waste? After finally getting in, you end up doing things like this. Isn't it true that the world is just a grassroots team, as long as someone is worse than you? It's really a bit too hasty to do this kind of latent sabotage and pull people in, and then just do it like this.

The plot is too rough, not polished at all, and some parts look very abrupt.

Get a peerless sword. As long as you hold this sword, you will be invincible in the eyes of others. But it cannot kill any life, it can only destroy objects.

What is this about? "I have multiple golden fingers." What number do you have?