Douluo Dragon King: Nine Dragons Breaking the Abyss

It's on the shelves and updated every day? If your output is too small, there will be fewer and fewer people.

I don't understand why everyone is talking about Xiang Yu being trapped under cover? It seems that this ancient battlefield in the Central Plains is doomed to be a disaster for us. 20 Years ago, I embarked on a journey from Xuzhou and started the second Northern Expedition. Although the Chinese Begonias were unified, wherever our party and our troops went, the people welcomed us. It can be said that we have all the time. The realm of vitality and all things competing is still before our eyes. Just 20 years later, has this changed and become my burial place? In the ancient battlefield of Xuzhou, no matter how we say the battle strength is 800,000 versus 600,000, the advantage lies with me! 😡😡😡

Forcing Tang Wulin to eat the protagonist's problematic semen and blood, and fucking Cai Yue'er with passion. This is really disrespectful, and the enemy still covets Gu Yuena. If she didn't deal with it earlier, she said not to kill the child, so forget it, but she reluctantly endured it and waited for him to be killed. But what happened later was so disgusting that I regretted subscribing.

Here I will explain the protagonist's attitude towards Qiangu Dieting and Leng Yaozhu when his martial soul awakens. Take the perspective of the protagonist, you have traveled through time, and are about to be struck by lightning when your martial soul awakens. When you thought you were about to die, what you saw was Leng Yaozhu standing in front of you. When Qiangu Dieting went out to fight the thunder, the protagonist did not feel it. Later you learned that your grandfather was a profit-oriented Qiangu Dieting, and you had a teacher by your side, Leng Yaozhu, whom even the Silver Dragon King would never forget. How should you choose? It is the choice of most people to choose to become a disciple and find a reliable backer. Later, when I saw the sluggish Qiangu Dieting, I wrote about the protagonist's inner tangle. The previous book said that the natives rushed to grandma's house. This book is about how you, the time-travelers, are brought into God's perspective again. I really cried to death😭😭😭

Is the author not very imaginative? Why do the soul skills seem so low? The first soul skill, Metal Storm, seems to be that the control of the gold element is higher. Why not give yourself some buffs? The second soul skill, Ice Falls, is even more powerful. What do you mean by freezing a puddle of water from the sky? Do you really have the nerve to say that it is the soul ring of the Ice Dragon King? And after being suppressed for ten years, this is not a battle between one and two. If you fight one against two, the soul ring cannot grow. When Dou San has a spiritual ascension platform, you have absorbed rubbish. When I think that the soul skills behind the male protagonist are all corresponding elements that burst out in a 20-meter range, I really don't know how to complain. This is the same as blue silver entanglement. They are the characteristics of the martial spirit itself. If the author really thinks this way, I can only say that you have obtained half of Tang San's true inheritance.

The author's emotional drama is so bad, harem stories are really not something you can write casually. Although the story without a heroine is a bit less attractive, it is really good if it is well written; the single heroine is suitable for novices who take the emotional line, and is attractive enough; the harem story is well written and has nothing to say, and the rest is really hard to describe in a word. You will find that after removing the main plot, it is just a short essay, which is the kind at the bottom. I think you might as well go to someone who specializes in writing short essays. And whether the protagonist is a real scumbag or a sanctimonious scumbag. Don't just accept it as soon as you find something good to write down later on, it will really drop in price.

I don't understand what the author's writing about Qiangu Dongfeng's killing of the protagonist's parents does to him. Could it be that the protagonist's mother can still take away his position as the tower master? Being found out after killing his mother may also cause Qiangu to fall and hate Qiangu Dongfeng. It feels like it's just for the protagonist to have a conflict with Qiangu Dongfeng, but the reason for this conflict is really a failure.

When I saw Sun Wukong in the introduction, I thought the martial spirit was the Coiling Dragon Stick, Fiery Eyes, or a monkey. However, your Coiling Dragon Stick has so many elements. When did Wukong become good at using these elements? I couldn't teach him even if he wanted to. Either the Dragon Coiling Stick was just a stick, or the dragon soul in it was replaced by the East China Sea Dragon from Journey to the West. The Dinghai Shen Needle will also work, it has its own suppression function, and is just for Poseidon.

What's the point of you writing chapters 164-166? To show how powerful Yun Ming is without otherworld plug-ins, the protagonist with monkey plug-ins looks like a clown? He makes a fool of himself, and then relies on the master to end the farce, pure clowning! The protagonist is both upright and stupid, but the original character design is also broken in various ways! I also like the whole embarrassing forced sensationalism 👍

I feel that the homogeneity of female characters has become a bit serious later on. It was good in the early stage. Ever since Leng Yulaigu Yuena started to actively help the male protagonist attract people to the harem, the whole relationship line has gone askew. Playing like a big sister family can easily erase personal characteristics.

There should be less emotional drama, it's too embarrassing 😰

Pure white text, I feel like the author is like a primary school student

How should I put it? Xiaodu is very abstract. He can say something about his ugly brother after only a few days of knowing him. Are you very familiar with him? What about Dadu? In the original book, no one knew that there was a plane lord in the Douluo plane, not even the abyss, so Tang Hao did not interfere. But in this book, everyone knew that there was a plane lord, and it was the plane lord who suppressed the person who could not become a god, rather than passively suppressing it. It can only be said to be very abstract.

It's really unnecessary to force Cai Yue'er's role onto Yun Ming. I think there are several reasons why you insist on writing it like this: First, to clean up Qiangu Dieting, because now he is the protagonist's grandfather, so in order to make his image more positive, Yun Ming is made into a clown. Obviously in the original work, he is the same as Qiangu Dongfeng, not a good person. Second, in order to win over Leng Yaozhu and Yali, because Yun Ming is a clown, it is normal for them to fall in love with the protagonist. 🥺 I can only say that it is difficult to comment. He is the best in an era. He became an Ultimate Douluo in his thirties, and created a demi-god in his hundredth year. His talent and talent can be called the first person in the history of Douluo Continent. He may be proud, but he is by no means so unbearable.

I have to appear in the fandom area because of love. What I mean is whether Ouyang Zixin can be integrated into Mu Xi's line. It doesn't take too much, just one or two sentences. In the same way, Zi Ji and Bi Ji can also occupy a little bit of Gu Yuena's line. People who watch Harem are very picky, but they are also very satisfying. Just like before, when you sign up for a wedding at the end, the proportion doesn't need to be too much, the main thing is that the people should be there. A little greedy suggestion. Happy New Year 2025.

I really like the character Yali very much. The author arranges to replenish her essence and she can become pregnant.

The protagonist is an out-and-out Minotaur who specializes in stealing other people's wives. The author of the Minotaur protagonist likes to watch Minotaurs in reality.

I used to have one or two chapters a day, but now I have one chapter a week. Goodbye then.

It's just that the relationship line is too perverted, almost pure yy. When I see a girl, I can't walk. I either throw myself into my arms or look at her with a look of love. She hugs me at the age of twelve and has a bright future. This makes me, a two-meter-tall and two-ton Liangzi, laugh.

Give up, give up, you can still do one chapter a week, and I won't say why. The update speed is amazing.

It's no longer possible to update once a day.

As title

The most popular heroines are Xu Xiaoyan and Gu Yuena. Are the others just vases? (Hold?

The Spirit Realm in the Dragon King Legend period has its own unique advantage, that is, through practice, it can form its own spiritual realm This is different from the realm brought about by soul skills and special circumstances. This is a "supernatural power" evolved by the soul master after his own spiritual power has transformed to a certain extent, combined with his own martial soul. In the original work, Tang Wulin's time rewind and Gu Yuena's spatial confinement The effects of fields are also strong and weak. In addition to the most basic amplification and weakening, each field also has its own unique effect. For example, the murderous intimidation and murderous intent in the Killing God Realm are materialized, the soul power in the Angel Realm is dissolved, and Tang Wulin and Gu Yuena's veritable time retrieval and space confinement In the original work, Tang Wulin relied on the time retrieval feature to break through the Thousand Demon King's instantaneous thousand-year realm and suppress him in the realm

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A good fanfic about the Legend of the Dragon King, worth reading (don't read this one, no need to read it, just read the chapter "Statement 2", see the way to read the sequel, the chapter "Statement 2" is available, just read the sequel)