Dou Po: Snow Snow Fruit at the Beginning

I just read a chapter or two and couldn't stand it anymore. Xiao Bai, the pig's foot, preconceived the idea that the second elder was the villain. What's wrong? Are all anti-inflammatory people villains? And the second elder is pretty good to the protagonist Xiao Bai. I don't know what's written next? 🤫

Wouldn't it be beautiful to turn Xiao Yan into Xiao Yan'er?

Don't you know how to write a female protagonist yourself? There are so many elements in heaven and earth, and it's not just fire. People call it Qinglian Earth Heart Fire, but wouldn't you call it Snow Lotus Xuanyu Bing?

After reading two chapters, it's true that the protagonist is the little Yakuza

Haha, you should go back and move bricks. Don't harm the novel. I couldn't stand the first chapter.

The other protagonists try their best to avoid the Yunlan Sect, but this is the first time you have tried to recruit Xiao Yan to join the Yunlan Sect.

You can't walk when you see a woman, right? Many writers of novels are like this. They can't walk when they see a beautiful woman.

Inexplicably, I skipped to King of Fighting and it felt like it didn't feel like it was written by the same person. It became more and more inexplicable that the protagonist's style completely changed and he left.

If everything has already yielded fruit, what else is needed? And shouldn't this snow-snow fruit be of the natural type? Isn't the natural system more invincible?

Will it be released after more than 20 chapters? It's really ugly to eat. . .

It's better to read the original novel when you are reborn in the Xiao family

It's really six to start collecting money at 59 cards.

What are you writing about? ? Disgusting 🤮

If the author wants to give birth to a female protagonist, she must say she has potential and is useful. You must not collect the vase. The three female protagonists, the Little Medical Fairy Qinglin Ziyan, have the right potential to reduce inflammation. The impact is actually not big. And the protagonist should take another route, right? It would be better to have these three female protagonists. Since they have already written fan fiction, why go the same old route as the branch? In addition to Alien Fire, there seems to be Yiyi Lei writing new ideas. Isn't this comparable? Old fashioned, strong.

There is no market for Qidian's Cultivation Fans. There are only a few things I want to see. The main focus is on cultivation, and the female protagonist is just an embellishment for aesthetic fatigue. The male protagonist must be charming and not mentally retarded. The Xiao family's Xun'er must be accepted as his place of birth, and Xiao Yan must be treated as an ordinary clan member (never write Burning Jue, there are too many people writing it, and you can guess the subsequent plot). After accepting one female protagonist, the male protagonist must not have any thoughts of accepting another (this is a world where cultivation is the main thing. He always thinks about women, so why should he cultivate). If you continue to accept female protagonists later, you have to write a plot to make the male protagonist charming and attract other people of the opposite sex (how to get together again is what the author wants to think about). The level is always a big step higher than Xiao Yan. Otherwise, it will not be fun. In the later stage, you must unite with Xiao Yan to fight against the soul clan (you can't give up the non-union of the same clan and unite with outsiders).

Hand-made ice cream must be very profitable, right? 😃

The author must write reasonably. The combat power system cannot collapse too much. The villain's IQ cannot be too low.

Don't put Chapter 25 on the shelves, I understand everything.

Is the author kidding himself? I skipped to Douwang out of nowhere, and many of the previous details were unclearly described.

It's so cool. Participating in the plot has no impact, and the idea is quite strange.

This protagonist's virtue is not as good as Tang San's

This is simply An Lushan entering Chang'an.

The start is okay, quite unique. I read very few ice-type fanfics. Unfortunately, the protagonist is a clinging toe. In simple translation, it means licking a dog. Isn't it good to write your own plot and avoid the original protagonist? What a pity

Don't worry about it, it's still pretty cool

It comes really fast and cuts really fast. I just saw it and found it interesting, so I scrolled down to finish this article...

Recommend a new book - Peerless Tang Sect: I Simulate the Legend of the Dragon King

Incomplete writing is worse than not writing at all. It's like the tuba is only halfway stretched and then completely over.